This was a solid little mini adventure. The grammar could use some work, but it was a fun little romp.

Unfortunately this type of game is not something I am personally into, so I don't know how to compare it to existing work. The brevity was perfectly fine for me. I don't think convoluted games made in game jams work well - simply because there isn't enough time to polish it all. Anyway, just my 2 cents.

Great! This is probably the game I have spent most time playing

A little mini adventure. Awesome story for 48 hours, but boring for me. Could use some more interactivity, that makes it way more fun. I didn't see any reference to the theme thought.