Flight by Norgg
I've been pretty busy travelling this weekend, so here's a Twine tale about going on a trip.
To access the source, just download the page and import it into http://twinery.org/2/
To access the source, just download the page and import it into http://twinery.org/2/
| Web | http://norgg.org/files/flight.html |
| Source | http://norgg.org/files/flight.html |
| Original URL | https://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-32/?action=preview&uid=5283 |
Ratings
| Coolness | 45% | 1497 |
| Overall | 3.19 | 536 |
| Fun | 2.96 | 621 |
| Humor | 3.20 | 305 |
| Innovation | 2.83 | 735 |
| Mood | 3.48 | 172 |
| Theme | 3.18 | 688 |
Feedback
FerraWare
20. Apr 2015 · 02:14 UTC
Cool text-game, but a little flat and short overall. 10/10 would sleep every chance they have
PaperBlurt
20. Apr 2015 · 06:15 UTC
Ha. It wraps up nice in the end.
RobotParking
20. Apr 2015 · 12:36 UTC
AND THAT, MY DEAR, IS ~HOW BABIES ARE MADE~
emmelineprufrock
23. Apr 2015 · 04:36 UTC
I like the final line. A lot.
steboots
26. Apr 2015 · 20:19 UTC
And there you go, that's how it's done.
ianh
27. Apr 2015 · 10:07 UTC
Short and sweet!
BabaJaga
27. Apr 2015 · 15:33 UTC
Whaaat?! That was unexpected :D
freeholdgames
27. Apr 2015 · 17:10 UTC
Wonderfully evocative. Short but sweet.
Chaoseed
10. May 2015 · 14:11 UTC
That was...odd. I'm not sure I really buy it; I mean, the 'ending' made me roll my eyes. Still! You actually tried something unusual, and I cannot stress enough how happy that makes me. ;)
Jwatt
11. May 2015 · 16:04 UTC
I don't really have much to say about this. It was short and the writing was kinda unique. Usually these story games are full of mundanities to obviously pad the playing time, this is more what they should be.