My Dear Pencil by Dorgam
A Challenging and fun platformer puzzle about a boy and his pencil.
You switch the available platforms by erasing an enemy. Try to reach the gate through erasing enemies in right order.
Controls are in game.
Changelog:
* Fixed Collision Bugs
* Fixed Resolution Bug
* Fixed Music Bug
* Fixed Credit Menu
* Fixed Background
* Fixed Animation Bug
To contact me:
https://twitter.com/TheDorgam
Have Fun!
You switch the available platforms by erasing an enemy. Try to reach the gate through erasing enemies in right order.
Controls are in game.
Changelog:
* Fixed Collision Bugs
* Fixed Resolution Bug
* Fixed Music Bug
* Fixed Credit Menu
* Fixed Background
* Fixed Animation Bug
To contact me:
https://twitter.com/TheDorgam
Have Fun!
Ratings
| Coolness | 67% | 3 |
| Overall(Jam) | 3.41 | 346 |
| Audio(Jam) | 3.22 | 306 |
| Fun(Jam) | 3.43 | 244 |
| Graphics(Jam) | 3.39 | 468 |
| Humor(Jam) | 2.13 | 843 |
| Innovation(Jam) | 3.47 | 274 |
| Mood(Jam) | 3.18 | 437 |
| Theme(Jam) | 3.31 | 549 |
I am not so fan of the controls. Switching between W and then go to S really quickly is annoying. I also don't like the R button. can't it just auto restart?
One minor problem that happened once or twice was that my character fell directly through a platform, I only noticed it on one level (the level where the moving enemies were introduced).
Would love to play more once it's polished!
Great job!
Nice entry! Well done!
I recommend adding ghost jumping (a brief moment where you can still jump even though you ran off the edge of a platform). It would make it easier to design harder levels without feeling unfair.
For some criticism, the art was very lacking. There was only one enemy (which I liked the design of), very simple platform graphics and not much of a background. You are probably aware of that though. Secondly, pressing the E button to hop on their head seems almost pointless. As long as you press (and hold) it once before hopping on an enemy's head, it works. I would prefer that you do away with having to press anything to kill an enemy.
Overall, there is definitely some promise here. Nice gameplay, nice controls, and a neat mechanic. Good job!
Platform physics are cool, i had a little bit of difficulty to find how to jump on enemies, but i'm a noob :-)
Also, need more levels !! Good job.
Cheers
I liked the sfx for hit, although the music could match up a bit better.