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How to Train Your Human by sally_anne

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made by sally_anne for LD32 (COMPO)
A twine game about cats using themselves as sleeper agent weapons to take down humanity.
Web http://sallyanne.itch.io/how-to-train-your-human
Source https://www.dropbox.com/sh/etj7k9j3s524yip/AAB6-QLxXQBmmEKOX_Je6cAEa?dl=0
Original URL https://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-32/?action=preview&uid=50348

Ratings

Coolness 75% 2
Overall 3.18 548
Fun 2.77 800
Graphics 2.55 844
Humor 3.32 248
Innovation 2.69 830
Mood 3.26 286
Theme 2.97 830

Feedback

Move127
20. Apr 2015 · 02:28 UTC
Would have been a lot more interesting if there had been some animation, or at least more pictures, to go along with the text.
generic_ghost
20. Apr 2015 · 02:33 UTC
This was very charming! I enjoyed the writing and the choices I was offered. Good job!
Languard
20. Apr 2015 · 03:00 UTC
Cute and charming, however I'm having trouble getting the feel of 'An Unconventional Weapon'. I can kinda see it in how you 'control' the human, but it feels weak.

Also, there's not any good way to get a feel for how you're doing.
ehtd
20. Apr 2015 · 03:18 UTC
Your ate well over the weekend. Nice.
mcmahoniel
20. Apr 2015 · 03:19 UTC
I'm not sure how this aligns with the theme, but I liked it.
ErikU
20. Apr 2015 · 03:20 UTC
Interesting take on the theme. It was nice to see that each of the paths was meaningful. Can't say I was able to beat it though. Regardless, well done.
ZQMony
20. Apr 2015 · 03:22 UTC
Very complete story, but some more picture would be nice.
Sorak86
20. Apr 2015 · 03:26 UTC
Nice!
I was thinking about a twine game too. Was nice to see someone how made it. It's a pretty nice idea!
Flygamer101
20. Apr 2015 · 03:36 UTC
Great idea, but would be a little better with animations and such.
qapn
20. Apr 2015 · 03:47 UTC
I didn't really get how this one related to the theme. It would have been nice to have some artwork for some of the story stages too.

Had some funny bits in your writing though.
Fanttum
20. Apr 2015 · 04:02 UTC
Haha, haven't seen a game like this in a while. Fun jokes, and good style. Not really my type of "game" per say, but I think you did a good job.
Azure_Kyte
20. Apr 2015 · 04:41 UTC
A choose your path adventure with social engineering as your weapon? This was a funny read, good job :D
TheBigShot
20. Apr 2015 · 05:41 UTC
Very cute. Nicely written and put together. great example of a Jam Game.
PaperBlurt
20. Apr 2015 · 06:18 UTC
Good graphics.
Maybe a bit slow sometimes, but the premise is nice...
Always great when people design their twines.
rg_rem
20. Apr 2015 · 08:26 UTC
The human's love for you: 125 / 115
ironleonem
20. Apr 2015 · 08:32 UTC
It was charming and fun, but the website was a little hard to navigate and work around... which I don't really think should happen in an interactive fiction. I am a fan of the IF genre, and overall, this does not disappoint. Well done.
Dyn
20. Apr 2015 · 10:46 UTC
Cats are so sweet)
🎤 sally_anne
20. Apr 2015 · 17:44 UTC
I have made all the images smaller so that it fits better in the screen, @ironleonem.
@rg_rem I am super impressed with 125 love! Have updated the stats page, I was too burned out to actually count up the value last night.
Lady Beardo
20. Apr 2015 · 20:25 UTC
Ha- this is super cute. I like the trade-off amongst the stats, giving you more than one objective for playing the game. :3
wearehomebound
21. Apr 2015 · 00:12 UTC
I loved how many paths there were to take, and the drawings were cute. Overall good game.
Draknek
22. Apr 2015 · 11:14 UTC
Couldn't give 5 stars for graphics because it doesn't contain a terrible cat drawing.
emmelineprufrock
23. Apr 2015 · 04:57 UTC
Very cute. Love the art.