Thirteen by enderargent

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made by enderargent for LD30 (JAM)
As a private detective, you're following the trails of one mysterious man.

Everything was pointing to an abandoned hotel and now you must find your way out of there, but not everything is what it seems...

Solo entry.
Thanks to freesfx. co. uk for some of the sounds.

Ratings

Coolness 100% 1
Overall(Jam) 3.00 522
Audio(Jam) 2.63 518
Fun(Jam) 2.62 603
Graphics(Jam) 3.48 341
Humor(Jam) 2.17 475
Innovation(Jam) 2.28 694
Mood(Jam) 3.47 189
Theme(Jam) 2.63 578

Feedback

lucienpro
25. Aug 2014 路 07:46 UTC
Ummm. Looks cool but there is no link...
馃帳 enderargent
25. Aug 2014 路 09:06 UTC
I'm still working on the game, sorry for the mistake uploading this too soon.
elkiwydev
25. Aug 2014 路 09:08 UTC
No link
@TeddyNashor
25. Aug 2014 路 09:09 UTC
dont rate any entries before you put up a link because it puts you at the top of the queue since you rated, but ahve no ratings. haha oh well, know for next time XD.
馃帳 enderargent
25. Aug 2014 路 09:16 UTC
Thanks didn't know that, haha it's my first Ludum and I don't know that :P

Again, thanks.
ViliX
25. Aug 2014 路 09:24 UTC
Let me know when the link becomes available. Twitter: @ViliX64 Thanks. The screenshot looks cool.
HeuGamer
25. Aug 2014 路 17:07 UTC
Screenshot looks pretty interesting. Will have to check this one out when you are done!
Joncom
25. Aug 2014 路 17:41 UTC
The graphics do look nice :)
Alisher Bekenov
25. Aug 2014 路 18:42 UTC
褏械褉芯胁芯
IsaacL.Balogh
26. Aug 2014 路 00:46 UTC
Plays a lot like home but you might want to make it a bit more linear.
Raphy
26. Aug 2014 路 01:26 UTC
Cool game, sometimes it's hard to find what exact item you need to find but overall I like the mood.
toranoko
26. Aug 2014 路 01:31 UTC
Great game, only gripe was player walk speed, maybe add some running, also I didn't like that I couldn't continue walking when trying to pick stuff up, mostly because the walking was slow as is.
ClownAround
26. Aug 2014 路 01:50 UTC
Controls were a bit awkward. Cool game though. Nice idea.
馃帳 enderargent
26. Aug 2014 路 08:43 UTC
@toranoko thanks for the review, I will try to update the walk speed today since I'm out of home.

Thank you all for your reviews :)
panurge
26. Aug 2014 路 09:05 UTC
Very nice little game with an intriguing story and strong atmosphere. My only suggestions would be to increase the walk speed a little and allow players to pick things up straight after they've looked at them (the icons would disappear for me after I'd investigated something and I'd have to walk away then back again to interact with it).

Good work!
馃帳 enderargent
26. Aug 2014 路 10:00 UTC
@panurge Thanks for your feedback mate about the game I will upload soon an update with the walk speed fixed a bit, I'm sorry for the item/inventory but who knows, maybe I can add it ^^
bob_fish
26. Aug 2014 路 10:24 UTC
Very fun! I actually replayed it to see both endings! Love the art. If it Just had music, it would basically be perfect!
Nuclear Napalm
26. Aug 2014 路 10:33 UTC
The beginning of the game is really promising and intriguing. I like it because it similar to my concept. But both endings a bit disappointing. Anyway, great job!
Pavel
26. Aug 2014 路 11:29 UTC
Great pixel art.
rnlf
26. Aug 2014 路 13:07 UTC
Nice setting! Not sure why I needed the newspaper for the glass shards though. I was quite a bit shocked when the shotgun guy suddenly stood in front of me!
Reverend Speed
26. Aug 2014 路 13:09 UTC
Got the good ending! Great accomplishment for the jam - a nice, simple adventure. Great work!
Artamus
26. Aug 2014 路 13:25 UTC
Cool game, congrats!
Druid
26. Aug 2014 路 17:53 UTC
Wow, this remind me my last ld entry :D Anyway. Great work!
kyyrma
26. Aug 2014 路 18:01 UTC
Seconding that the walking speed is rather slow. I understand that a slower pace is good for building tension, but especially when you are unsure of what to do next it can get slightly tedious. A very solid first entry however, and I like the pixel art a lot!
DesignerNap
26. Aug 2014 路 18:14 UTC
I like the style and presentation of this game. I got the good ending! :)
spotco
27. Aug 2014 路 05:39 UTC
Pretty good puzzle-click-everywhere-while-walking-around game!
The good ending didn't explain anything though :(
Nichii
27. Aug 2014 路 13:27 UTC
The mood and atmosphere were excellent! However, the good and bad ending is kind of... eh, too short. But nevertheless, the atmosphere of this game were marvellous, I got scared when the robber spotted me!
馃帳 enderargent
27. Aug 2014 路 14:10 UTC
Thanks a lot guys! ^^

I want to write a small introduction to make the player understand better the plot ^^
yodamaster
27. Aug 2014 路 16:32 UTC
Nice adventure. I like the retro-style gfx.
43iscoding
27. Aug 2014 路 22:29 UTC
This game gave me chills... Graphics remind me of "the last door" series. Very solid entry!
zkenshin
28. Aug 2014 路 00:34 UTC
Very nice mood (:
MechanicMoon
28. Aug 2014 路 23:02 UTC
Really nice history! Great art! Good work dude!
danidre14
30. Aug 2014 路 20:21 UTC
Umm it's an okay game. Looks cool and all, but no music and gets boring fast. :\ Good luck though