Warp by sportsquid
well, this is my first ludum dare! This is a game made mainly with JavaScript, and some HTML. I didn't have time to add a lot of features that I wanted to like a tutorial so...
to play there are different places to go, each world has trees(click them to fight), a shop(click to buy/sell things), and a board(click to see information about the planet). to change planets click the portal. Different planets have different items at the shops for different prices and the forests have different enemies.
thanks for reading, and have fun!
to play there are different places to go, each world has trees(click them to fight), a shop(click to buy/sell things), and a board(click to see information about the planet). to change planets click the portal. Different planets have different items at the shops for different prices and the forests have different enemies.
thanks for reading, and have fun!
| Web | http://sportsquid.byethost16.com/warp.html |
| Source | http://www.mediafire.com/download/4wm3qhf6z8d6cf4/warp.zip |
| Original URL | https://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-30/?action=preview&uid=37495 |
Ratings
| Coolness | 45% | 1426 |
| Overall | 2.48 | 1117 |
| Fun | 2.71 | 840 |
| Graphics | 1.92 | 1168 |
| Humor | 2.15 | 679 |
| Innovation | 2.46 | 1013 |
| Mood | 2.44 | 974 |
| Theme | 3.00 | 724 |
But seriously, good first game jam! I gave everything pretty neutral ratings, because if nothing else, it was different. Everything on LD seems to be mash the spacebar these days (I'm a multi-time offender of this), and this was something I haven't seen for a while.
Keep working at it, because I can see potential in you :)
When I inspect the page, it appears there is no JavaScript included in it :/
Keep it up, this was awesome!
As a code quality matter, the indentation is all over the place, making the code hard to read (it's important for you to be able to follow your own code, too - it makes it faster to work with, and speed is everything in LD!). Also, you don't need all those individual <script> tags everywhere - you could put everything in one big <script> tag.
You seem to have // comments lying _outside_ the <script> tags, too, which would show up inside the body, where people can see them. The only reason no one sees them is because you're writing a new page with document.write() (but that's causing other issues).
(I'm not going to affect the ratings with code quality, just making some observations to pass on to you.)