Longer and better fleshed than most Twine entries turn out. I think I would have been able to tell you're a writer even if you weren't taking the opportunity to advertise in the sidebar.

I like the lore.
Keep working on the world.
Nice first Twine game!

Very good complete story.
I like how you managed to give the player meaningful choices while still keeping your story character intact.
I got a really bad ending, so I'm going to keep it open in a different and come back to it later.
Was this supposed to be a Jam entry? It says here it's a jam entry but in game it says it's a 48 compo entry.If it is a compo entry you might want to edit your page, if not I missunderstood.

Hi there. That was fun! Very enjoyable interactive story, good job.

Well written with a nicely expansive story. It's also quite pleasingly presented, unlike some other Twine entries that use the horrible default css settings. And there's a hell of a lot packed in there for a LD game, so well done!

Yep, I obviously hate mages. A great story with a naming mechanic I dont see in most twine games