{"author_link":"\/author\/paperblurt\/","author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","comments":[{"author_name":"hypp","author_uid":"14403","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 6:53am","epoch":1408949280,"text":"Excellent! I was really caught in the mood of the game!"},{"author_name":"Hamsternator","author_uid":"35790","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 10:11am","epoch":1408961160,"text":"I'm really impressed. Did not expect to get sucked into this storyline the way that I did. Great writing and excellent humour. Would definitely not mind playing an expanded version of this ^^"},{"author_name":"gardenhead","author_uid":"40724","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 10:44am","epoch":1408963140,"text":"Wow, I was ready to quit, but it really sucked me in. Great writing!"},{"author_name":"Makio","author_uid":"24863","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 10:57am","epoch":1408963920,"text":"It remember me my childhood with &quot;the book where you are the hero&quot;, a lot of storytelling, long to start but when choice come it give a very nice feeling and you give a lot to the staging, great stuff !"},{"author_name":"Markavian","author_uid":"10967","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 10:57am","epoch":1408963920,"text":"good bye... am I a mass murdered now?"},{"author_name":"43iscoding","author_uid":"35110","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 10:57am","epoch":1408963920,"text":"Thou, good sir, are brilliant! I'm not that much into quests, but this one just sucked me into it :)\r<br\/>\r<br\/>The only thing you lack is some moody music."},{"author_name":"SteveSalmond","author_uid":"24965","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 10:58am","epoch":1408963980,"text":"I was also pulled in by the story and had to read the whole thing :)  Some really great writing!"},{"author_name":"buckslice","author_uid":"40882","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 11:01am","epoch":1408964160,"text":"Great story! Really cool effects and graphics. Felt like a movie that I had control over."},{"author_name":"A333","author_uid":"38947","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 11:08am","epoch":1408964580,"text":"Writing is terrific, graphics are subtle and clean. Humble animations are really adding to the mood, too. \r<br\/>I've only been slightly annoyed by the Makida console keeps popping after the first slug stop."},{"author_name":"Conk","author_uid":"40797","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 11:10am","epoch":1408964700,"text":"Wow, I didn't expect to find such a well crafted story! I would play that again! (I assume there are multiple endings)"},{"author_name":"Pantelis Petsopoulos","author_uid":"34259","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 11:38am","epoch":1408966380,"text":"Spaceman with 70 pornmovies 7.8\/7.8\r<br\/>Seriously though, how did you write this in 2 days? It's amazing!"},{"author_name":"DrCicero","author_uid":"33845","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 11:42am","epoch":1408966620,"text":"I like how its not only text, despite being a text game. That makes it easier to get into the game."},{"author_name":"Akurn","author_uid":"40190","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 12:45pm","epoch":1408970400,"text":"Great writing!"},{"author_name":"dadman","author_uid":"42062","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 8:10pm","epoch":1408997100,"text":"I love the amount of polish in this, it's really cool. I was also properly reading the story, where for some of the other twine games I found myself skimming through the passages.\r<br\/>  I did hit a bug where I kept being swapped over to the original monitor screen, however this might have been cause by me clicking previous page in the web browser...? (using Firefox)\r<br\/>  Regardless, I restarted and got to the end, so it wasn't a big problem."},{"author_name":"Ditto","author_uid":"14669","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 8:11pm","epoch":1408997160,"text":"Shit that was good! Maybe the ending felt a bit disappointing, I steered into the loop, it seems a bit rushed compared to the otherwise very solid writing.. Overall it's been a long time since I read something so entertaining, both funny and a bit scary. Really fucking good work dude! :D"},{"author_name":"lightsoda","author_uid":"19698","time":"Aug 25, 2014 @ 8:44pm","epoch":1408999140,"text":"Nice, the story is pretty good and well written.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I did notice a couple of small things\r<br\/>conveyer belt\r<br\/>one itsy bitsy questions"},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 10:33am","epoch":1409048880,"text":"--\r<br\/>\r<br\/>SOME INFO:\r<br\/>\r<br\/>\r<br\/>So hi everybody.\r<br\/>Thanks for playing my game.\r<br\/>And I'm glad you liked it...\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Some of you have spotted a bug (so have I).\r<br\/>And as I've tried to fix it I'm 99% certain that it only occurs when you go &quot;back&quot; with your back button in the browser at the last Console Screen.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>So...DON'T DO THAT!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>I've added a little cheat link on the very last page instead that you can use to try the other endings, and hopefully that will solve it!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>--"},{"author_name":"Snoother","author_uid":"33841","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 11:03am","epoch":1409050680,"text":"I really looked forward to playing your entry after seeing what you did last LD, and this lived up to all my hopes. I think I preferred it to your last one actually: the initial premise is perhaps less gripping, but the story felt more engrossing, it was equally as well written and funny, and it's quite possibly the most gorgeous-looking twine I've seen. It's a high scorer, for me at least. Really don't know how you managed it in 48 hours -- I'm kind of envious."},{"author_name":"SketchyGalore","author_uid":"30014","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 12:23pm","epoch":1409055480,"text":"I, like the other comments, got absorbed and had to read through the whole thing! I'm a big fan of humor in text-pacing (I'm sure there's a word for that), so this was great! Kudos!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Oh, and thank you for your kind comment on my game as well :)"},{"author_name":"Tommislav","author_uid":"2393","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 4:32pm","epoch":1409070420,"text":"Love it (as usual). Great mood. I also like the retro font of this futuristic console, and the cameo of Rocky Barbato =D. The graphics were excellent as well and enhanced the mood!"},{"author_name":"garygreen","author_uid":"13914","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 7:57pm","epoch":1409082720,"text":"Really enjoyed the story - very absorbing &amp; some funny moments too."},{"author_name":"bluemaroo3","author_uid":"39635","time":"Aug 27, 2014 @ 1:38pm","epoch":1409146380,"text":"Brilliant story.  Love what you've done with twine. Had me hooked till the end :)"},{"author_name":"BuffaloPhil","author_uid":"8563","time":"Aug 27, 2014 @ 3:26pm","epoch":1409152860,"text":"Really great story, man!"},{"author_name":"frogcheese","author_uid":"25059","time":"Aug 27, 2014 @ 6:50pm","epoch":1409165100,"text":"Great story with a fantastic mood. I was pleasantly surprised by all the little touches on the text and background. It really helped with immersion. Nicely done!"},{"author_name":"Linusson","author_uid":"25442","time":"Aug 27, 2014 @ 7:00pm","epoch":1409165700,"text":"Great story! Very well written. Loved it! Thank you for making this! :)"},{"author_name":"stasss","author_uid":"31999","time":"Aug 27, 2014 @ 8:02pm","epoch":1409169420,"text":"Very original, like it a lot! (Specially moment with wikipedia). Keep going on!"},{"author_name":"ajopart","author_uid":"40976","time":"Aug 28, 2014 @ 11:33am","epoch":1409225280,"text":"Excellent design and story !"},{"author_name":"Lars Faust","author_uid":"25107","time":"Aug 28, 2014 @ 1:12pm","epoch":1409231220,"text":"That really sucked me in. Very moody. \r<br\/>\r<br\/>I felt the ending was a bit strange, though. Why would i drop 3 compartments and kill 70m people, when not dropping any and just fly through the loop as it is would kill the &quot;bad guys&quot;, who are not in their protective tubes, just as well? \r<br\/>\r<br\/>I really like these interactive-story submissions though. Good one."},{"author_name":"dook","author_uid":"18341","time":"Aug 28, 2014 @ 2:33pm","epoch":1409236080,"text":"That was super engaging! I love the setting and it had a pleasant pacing. Good humour too. I'll try it again later on and make some different choices.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>In my game's comment thread you mentioned some other games using Unity+Twine, do you remember which ones? I'd like to try them :)"},{"author_name":"nilstastic","author_uid":"2443","time":"Aug 28, 2014 @ 8:31pm","epoch":1409257560,"text":"Pros: Excellent story!\r<br\/>Cons: None actually, i really enjoyed this one. =)"},{"author_name":"egor-idiot","author_uid":"23565","time":"Aug 29, 2014 @ 8:06am","epoch":1409299260,"text":"Oh that one is really cool. I didn't get to the end on my work, but definately will in the evening. Well done."},{"author_name":"Crowbeak","author_uid":"16689","time":"Aug 29, 2014 @ 12:39pm","epoch":1409315640,"text":"Well written, with graphics and CSS used to good effect. I quite enjoyed this."},{"author_name":"tmpxyz","author_uid":"39382","time":"Aug 29, 2014 @ 12:51pm","epoch":1409316360,"text":"great story! like it!"},{"author_name":"Artamus","author_uid":"39880","time":"Aug 29, 2014 @ 6:25pm","epoch":1409336400,"text":"Nice and well written game, congrats!"},{"author_name":"AdricZero","author_uid":"822","time":"Aug 30, 2014 @ 2:17pm","epoch":1409407920,"text":"Really could have used some music to improve the audio and mood scores. Liked the storyline though."},{"author_name":"Hypnohustla","author_uid":"20803","time":"Aug 31, 2014 @ 12:14pm","epoch":1409486940,"text":"Crazy good presentation for a text game! Well written and  captivating story :)"},{"author_name":"leafarz","author_uid":"30173","time":"Aug 31, 2014 @ 12:23pm","epoch":1409487480,"text":"wow really great story here! and the mood was great but would love to have audios to complement!\r<br\/>great visuals also. and i like how the title bar gives your status in the game.\r<br\/>good job! :D"},{"author_name":"GrooveMan","author_uid":"26423","time":"Aug 31, 2014 @ 9:09pm","epoch":1409519040,"text":"Oh man, there's a whole bunch of stuff here I had no idea you could do in Twine! This is really technically impressive.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>The spaceventure was super engaging, but upon finding an ending, it seems to boot me to a menu that will take me to other random (and slightly contextless) endings. Hm."},{"author_name":"emmelineprufrock","author_uid":"22454","time":"Sep 2, 2014 @ 11:29pm","epoch":1409700240,"text":"Liked a lot of the aspects of this, especially the animation and several of the technical details. As always you are a proficient technical Twinesman. It got a tiny bit goofy at the end, which I wasn't as huge of a fan of, but I liked it."},{"author_name":"kristoffer zetterberg","author_uid":"27525","time":"Sep 4, 2014 @ 10:13am","epoch":1409825280,"text":"grymt jobbat PaperBlurt! alltid kul att se hur du utvecklas i din anv&auml;ndning av Twine-formatet lite mer f&ouml;r varje spel du g&ouml;r. hur du anv&auml;nder humor, sm&aring; absurda inslag, f&ouml;r att l&auml;tta upp och g&ouml;ra ber&auml;ttelsen mer underh&aring;llande &auml;r dessutom riktigt bra, &auml;ven om det sp&aring;rar ut lite mot slutet. men extremt sp&auml;nnande d&auml;r ett tag, och gillade speciellt hur du fick in konsoler och annat genom animationer och transitions. \r<br\/>\r<br\/>n&aring;gra stavfel dock:\r<br\/>&quot;To not being _be_ alone at the same time as you approach, nay stalk, with caution.&quot;\r<br\/>\r<br\/>minns inte exakt vad det stod men:\r<br\/>&quot;Space-Decibels&quot; - borde det inte vara &quot;Space-disciple&quot; med tanke p&aring; kontexten, eller &auml;r det n&aring;got sk&auml;mt jag inte f&ouml;rst&aring;r?"},{"author_name":"kristoffer zetterberg","author_uid":"27525","time":"Sep 4, 2014 @ 10:15am","epoch":1409825400,"text":"oops, doesn't work att skriva vissa tecken tydligen. oh well, du fattar antar jag."},{"author_name":"Sascha","author_uid":"25135","time":"Sep 7, 2014 @ 8:02pm","epoch":1410119820,"text":"Great story! Such a great use of different media, colors and page-styles to create different settings and atmosphere! Enjoyed playing it very much!"},{"author_name":"whalebot","author_uid":"36369","time":"Sep 10, 2014 @ 1:49am","epoch":1410313440,"text":"Excellent writing. I thoroughly enjoyed that."},{"author_name":"voxel","author_uid":"1789","time":"Sep 10, 2014 @ 6:30pm","epoch":1410373500,"text":"This is nice, it's too bad the clown image isn't original :( http:\/\/38.media.tumblr.com\/06e507c703e9933695986d784a551df2\/tumblr_natrhktUHM1qzknwuo1_1280.png you can't just run a filter over a photo and pretend you drew it during the compo. They might stand for that in Jam land, but we have standards sonny.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Other than that, really solid effort. One of the better LD twines for sure"},{"author_name":"SecondDimension","author_uid":"14838","time":"Sep 10, 2014 @ 9:52pm","epoch":1410385620,"text":"Such a good game, really well written and funny."},{"author_name":"apiotrw","author_uid":"30650","time":"Sep 13, 2014 @ 4:18pm","epoch":1410624780,"text":"Great mood"},{"author_name":"Jupiter_Hadley","author_uid":"27744","time":"Sep 14, 2014 @ 11:20pm","epoch":1410736500,"text":"Nice feel to it! I included it in part 26 of my Ludum Dare 30 compilation video series, if you&rsquo;d like to take a look :)  http:\/\/youtu.be\/hvOt_bkuFkM"},{"author_name":"AkirAssasin","author_uid":"38616","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 12:52pm","epoch":1410785220,"text":"Hahah that clown dude became the god :D but I can't finish it, it keeps bringing me to the console page after I chose my decision on whether to be with the 24-Rs"},{"author_name":"raddevon","author_uid":"38804","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 1:29pm","epoch":1410787440,"text":"This is incredible! Some of the slickest IF I've seen in a long while."},{"author_name":"PixelFeet","author_uid":"34877","time":"Sep 15, 2014 @ 5:25pm","epoch":1410801600,"text":"Both the story and its presentation were superb. Great work!"}],"images":["ld30\/26530-99c4970cd4de825e7b11b24379a8594b.jpg","ld30\/26530-855480bd3e9a5591f09fa2fcf9424bd3.jpg","ld30\/26530-8ac8f8fb8a74c281203d6c8860822569.jpg","ld30\/26530-5c09c1f54d8518caff4105e1aec32a79.jpg","ld30\/26530-4053b4561b640c4a3ab4b6392f940e0e.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/capsule.paperblurt.com","text":"web"},{"url":"http:\/\/capsule.paperblurt.com\/Capsule_Source_Code.txt","text":"source code"},{"url":"https:\/\/twitter.com\/paperblurt","text":"twitter"},{"url":"http:\/\/thetwinealbum.paperblurt.com","text":"The PaperBlurt Twine Album"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"17630","g_author":"26530","g_event":"LD30","g_eventkey":"24","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"17659","g_title":"Capsule","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"120","g_commentcount":"50","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/26530-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/26530-shot1.png-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/26530-shot2.png-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/26530-shot3.png-eq-900-500.jpg","http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/26530-shot4.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"Alone.\r\n\r\nIn space.\r\n\r\nA vessel the size of Wales, floating through the endless night.\r\nYou are the keeper of millions of people.\r\n\r\nBut what might be happening in Sector 24-R?\r\n\r\n* Multiple endings & Multiple Choices *\r\n\r\n- - - - - -\r\n\r\nA Twine game where the basic idea I got was \"Huge space ship in space with one lonely person\".\r\nThen the idea evolved somewhat, of course.\r\n\r\nPhotoshop is used for all crude animations and I also produced all images with it.\r\n\r\nIf you find any spelling errors or grammatical problems don't be afraid to say so.\r\n\r\n- - - - - -\r\n\r\nUPDATE 25\/8:\r\n\r\n- Tweaked the timing.\r\n- Fixed some typos.\r\n- Added the poster on the Start page.\r\n\r\nUPDATE 26\/8:\r\n\r\n- Fixed some typos spotted by \"lightsoda\".\r\n- Added a cheat link on the very last page to avoid a bug and providing players the possibility to try other endings.\r\n\r\nUPDATE 30\/8:\r\n\r\n- Added a few graphical elements and remade the animation with the fluorescent lights.\r\n(and at the same time I managed to overwrite my original entry, so the post-compo version is all I got now, but it's much better!)\r\n\r\nUPDATE 4\/9:\r\n\r\n- Spelling errors (thanks to kristoffer zetterberg)\r\n\r\nUPDATE 11\/9:\r\n\r\n- Fixed some issues with the font as some browser didn't load them.","title":"Capsule"}