{"author_link":"\/author\/caliberproject89\/","author_name":"Caliber_Project","author_uid":"41779","comments":[{"author_name":"Snoother","author_uid":"33841","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 11:46am","epoch":1409053260,"text":"It has promise, and it's good that you fiddled with the default Twine format to make it look more unique. But obviously it isn't complete so it's hard to fully judge.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Also I recommend that you host it on http:\/\/philome.la\/ At the moment you've put it up as a web link but it actually has to be downloaded -- this will probably annoy people, trust me, and you may well lose potential players because of it."},{"author_name":"Caliber_Project","author_uid":"41779","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 6:35pm","epoch":1409077800,"text":"Thanks Snoother for the hosted site referral. I recently edited the link for quick acess."},{"author_name":"Capitals","author_uid":"28209","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 8:06pm","epoch":1409083260,"text":"It's always difficult to rate text adventures, usually the stories are not interesting and I often am watching something while I test these games. This caught me off guard."},{"author_name":"Spang","author_uid":"38899","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 8:08pm","epoch":1409083380,"text":"Nice Novel ^^, thanks for changing the link now works better."},{"author_name":"bluemaroo3","author_uid":"39635","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 8:13pm","epoch":1409083680,"text":"Great to see another twine story\/game on here. Good luck with developing it further post jam :)"},{"author_name":"OinkIguana","author_uid":"38828","time":"Aug 26, 2014 @ 8:15pm","epoch":1409083800,"text":"Interesting story, but I kept reaching unfinished endings and then gave up trying to find a not-unfinished one. There were also a few typos in the text. No sound or graphics, due to it being a text game. The layout was fine, but didn't seem to add to the lonely motel guy atmosphere."},{"author_name":"PixelFeet","author_uid":"34877","time":"Aug 27, 2014 @ 2:35pm","epoch":1409149800,"text":"Very interesting story, wished to have seen more of it completed but i totally understand not having time for it all."},{"author_name":"GrooveMan","author_uid":"26423","time":"Aug 28, 2014 @ 8:51am","epoch":1409215560,"text":"It's always a shame when text-based entries have unfinished dead ends. Sometimes narrowing your scope and revising your story so what you \/do\/ have comes to a functional conclusion is the best option, even if it's not your initial vision."},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 28, 2014 @ 9:25am","epoch":1409217600,"text":"A good start, but would be fun to see the entire thing."}],"images":["ld30\/41779-15b02f4e1db9356098cbbd7030dbedba.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/philome.la\/Caliber_Project\/reach","text":"Web"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"17739","g_author":"41779","g_event":"LD30","g_eventkey":"24","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"17768","g_title":"Reach","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"762","g_commentcount":"9","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/375043\/41779-shot0.PNG-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"This unfinished text-based novel is created in Twine and my Debut entry to Ludum Dare. Reach is about a lonesome resident living in a motel, who experiences certain dreams when interacting with people.\r\n\r\nI do have an interest in improving it in the future,where I would like to include audio (especially ambient) for instance that fits with the scenarios.\r\n\r\n[Update 8-26-2014]\r\n- Link has been fixed. Thanks Snoother!\r\n\r\nThe theme within context of the game is supposed to have symbolism socially and metaphorically.","title":"Reach"}