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Home by Brenden Gibbons

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made by Brenden Gibbons for LD29 (JAM)
Home is a twine game. (NOTE: Internet Explorer doesn't seem to play the video for some reason. Chrome works fine.)

If you like or didn't like it, feel free to tell me why @BrendenGibbons

What would be super appreciated is if you'd tell me what you felt at the end, it lets me understand the impact of my work better! :) Thanks!
Web (Google Drive) http://bit.ly/1m18apw
Original URL https://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-29/?action=preview&uid=36166

Ratings

Coolness 46% 1460
Overall(Jam) 3.43 228
Audio(Jam) 2.42 569
Fun(Jam) 2.93 414
Graphics(Jam) 2.88 551
Humor(Jam) 2.32 471
Innovation(Jam) 3.17 299
Mood(Jam) 3.74 101
Theme(Jam) 3.88 47

Feedback

Zeta
29. Apr 2014 · 12:26 UTC
Not bad, I do like the background art and the adventure is very well storied!
BigGiantHead
29. Apr 2014 · 12:47 UTC
I love it. The multiple choice story is really nicely done. Good job.
hyouko
29. Apr 2014 · 12:56 UTC
An excellent take on the theme. Worth a play / read.

There are a handful of typos ("it's" in a few places that ought to be "its").
kmakai
29. Apr 2014 · 13:05 UTC
One of the more interesting twine games I've seen, kept me hooked til the end. Great job!
Andrew Adams
29. Apr 2014 · 13:05 UTC
Excellent story and creative wordplay. Well done.
archaeometrician
29. Apr 2014 · 13:28 UTC
I like the story, you are very imaginative ! The background are really lovely and fit perfectly with the way the story goes
Snoother
29. Apr 2014 · 16:34 UTC
Well-written and inventive. The multimedia fits well too.
TeamEagle
30. Apr 2014 · 16:43 UTC
nice story, totally different from every other interpretation of the theme!
javifugitivo
30. Apr 2014 · 16:46 UTC
Very creative story, its a good interactive novel.
PaperBlurt
03. May 2014 · 09:16 UTC
Hey man.

Good job, working with Twine.
Like that you've done a lot of with the styling, and I must say that your extensive lore about animals is fun to read.
Jupiter_Hadley
10. May 2014 · 01:21 UTC
Really interesting work with the layers, best text-based game I have ever played. I included it in part 18 of my Ludum Dare Compilation video series, if you'd like to take a look :) http://youtu.be/mAtRG2njZHE
Masadow
11. May 2014 · 16:54 UTC
I really like how you turned the genre. Clicking on text parts rather than choices is pretty interesting.

Some sounds would have been really cool to enhance the story
goerp
11. May 2014 · 17:46 UTC
Although this is technically a text adventure, I really like the graphics.
The mood was suberb, it really took me on a journey.
The video was not really for me. I found it didn't fit the mood. I think because your excellent texts made images in my mind that didn't go with the video.

For a Ludum Dare it needed some more interaction to be called a game. It's more of a linear story now. But I'm still glad I played it!
Daveloper
12. May 2014 · 20:14 UTC
Well written, painted an interesting environment.