This is the first game I am giving full marks across the board. Seriously enjoyed this one. Great use of audio, visuals concept the lot. Approach to the theme is excellent. Well done. Going to tweet this one :)

Providing a zip file is not "Web".

Soo... Beneath the surface, everyone is dead? I'm not sure that I'm getting it...

The audio was great though, very strange and effective! And the graphics suited the general mood and oddness quite well.

The presentation here is terrific. The graphics worked well for what you were trying to accomplish, and the music was perfect for setting the mood. I just wish that there had actually been more to do with it! But good work, nonetheless.

I like it. I'm not sure I understand exactly what's going on. The audio is well used and effective. GOOD JOB!

The audio is freaking awesome! The visual concept was nice to. However I felt like I was just going in circles and quickly got bored. However, great game, can't wait to see the next one!

@ZeppelinCaptain: Ah, I thought the red asterisks beside the 'Web' field meant I had to have one link there minimum. I see that's not the case as I've edited the page so now the .zip is linked from 'Windows', appropriately. Thanks for pointing that out!

Everyone else, thank you so much for your kind words and your critique! I agree that my conveyance could have been a lot better but some things were cut short due to time. I intend to write a post about my LD29 experience this weekend and more about the meaning of my game and stuff just to clear up any confusion. As the game is, the story's kind of half there.

I'll link to the post of my experience here for people when I write it. :)

Really really good audio.

Nice one, great simple touching little story. Stylish graphics, and suitable sound effects.

I love these kind of games and you managed to do it very well. Thanks!

Wow! This is an awesome entry!

You maybe could have polished it a little bit more, e. g. make a short tutorial at the beginning or show some credits at the end.

But the story is good and it really creates this strange feeling at the end, which is frightening (and awesome because it's such a good game). And the sound design is also really, really good.

Nice story. Audio is very great. Obviously need some polishing.

i wont say anything that someone else already mentioned. Thank you for the game! :)

Brilliance.

Nice game, but this happened:

FATAL ERROR in
action number 1
of Step EventPlayer
for object Teleporter:

Moving to previous room before the first room.
at gml_Object_Teleporter_Collision_5


Still, I like the game.

O_O That was definitely something, great audio work as usual, and I thought the dialogue and visuals definitly complimented it well.
Though I am now worried about your personal well being.

Not sure I understand the story, especially with this ending. The art and music work very well together though. A bit short maybe.

Nice mood and music.

I didn't quite get the intended meaning or implication. Good audio setting the atmosphere though.

Very.... interesting. I'm not sure what's going on. The music and color scheme did a great job of conveying the creepiness of all of it, though.

Interesting. Think I have an idea what you're trying to show, will have to mull it some more.

Lacks gameplay but the atnosphere is great, nice use of the theme.

Huh. I'll have to get back to this one, I'm not sure I understand it. Anyway, as an experiment, this is very interesting! Also, the mood is spot-on!