{"author_link":"\/author\/melondonut\/","author_name":"Melondonut","author_uid":"35153","comments":[{"author_name":"Rick Hoppmann","author_uid":"10000","time":"Apr 28, 2014 @ 11:22pm","epoch":1398727020,"text":"I wouldn't say that's a game, but a digital story with various branches to discover. Anyway, the story was ok, but missing some interesting twist to me.\rI rather dislike the present tense for telling a story."},{"author_name":"cr2crstudios","author_uid":"37025","time":"Apr 28, 2014 @ 11:37pm","epoch":1398727920,"text":"Interesting story. Good interface!"},{"author_name":"Daniel X. Moore","author_uid":"2816","time":"Apr 28, 2014 @ 11:42pm","epoch":1398728220,"text":"Thank you for telling this story. It was illuminating about the recent event."},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Apr 29, 2014 @ 6:29am","epoch":1398752640,"text":"I'm not the one to judge as I too have typos and grammatical errors in my Twines, but here they are a bit too many.\r\rBut I DO like twines that doesn't take place in a fantasy world or in space.\r\rKeep it up!"},{"author_name":"Melondonut","author_uid":"35153","time":"Apr 29, 2014 @ 6:46am","epoch":1398753660,"text":"thank your for your comments. I will correct the grammatical errors soon. :D"},{"author_name":"Snoother","author_uid":"33841","time":"Apr 29, 2014 @ 8:34am","epoch":1398760140,"text":"Yeah, a few too many grammatical errors, but I too am pleased to play a twine game that isn't fantastical. The subject matter was certainly interesting and well-dealt-with, but the prose felt a bit plane."},{"author_name":"Snoother","author_uid":"33841","time":"Apr 29, 2014 @ 8:36am","epoch":1398760260,"text":"*plain"},{"author_name":"Mandlebar","author_uid":"37415","time":"Apr 29, 2014 @ 1:14pm","epoch":1398776940,"text":"A really interesting take on the theme and relevant to recent events! Story was well told too!"},{"author_name":"Melondonut","author_uid":"35153","time":"Apr 29, 2014 @ 3:38pm","epoch":1398785580,"text":"I know my writing is poor. ;( I have to study English a lot more. Thank you for playing and comments!"},{"author_name":"micdoodle8","author_uid":"36649","time":"May 1, 2014 @ 6:59am","epoch":1398927240,"text":"Nice job, very unique and interesting story."},{"author_name":"Tomski","author_uid":"30523","time":"May 4, 2014 @ 9:01pm","epoch":1399236960,"text":"interesting idea!"},{"author_name":"Melondonut","author_uid":"35153","time":"May 7, 2014 @ 5:54pm","epoch":1399484940,"text":"Thanks for playing :D good to hear that!"},{"author_name":"The-nameless-kompany","author_uid":"34992","time":"May 8, 2014 @ 5:29am","epoch":1399526640,"text":"It's a good history. Maybe later you can add some images."},{"author_name":"Melondonut","author_uid":"35153","time":"May 8, 2014 @ 3:55pm","epoch":1399564200,"text":"thanks for your comment :D I will consider it"},{"author_name":"ArthurMaker","author_uid":"17385","time":"May 9, 2014 @ 8:44am","epoch":1399624740,"text":"Okay Pretty good work for being a text based game , WELL DONE.... CHECK OUT MY GAME"},{"author_name":"Rabbits...","author_uid":"11321","time":"May 16, 2014 @ 9:47pm","epoch":1400276520,"text":"I've been following this on the news, It was cool seeing your prospective on the matter."},{"author_name":"Melondonut","author_uid":"35153","time":"May 19, 2014 @ 2:28am","epoch":1400466180,"text":"Thank you all! phew. there are still missing people.. about 10. It was just a disaster by human-error."},{"author_name":"wschorn","author_uid":"36225","time":"May 19, 2014 @ 3:15am","epoch":1400469000,"text":"some nice writing but no assets, no clear writing style or characters"},{"author_name":"Clinthoney","author_uid":"34437","time":"May 19, 2014 @ 4:13am","epoch":1400472480,"text":"Not a bad game just wish you gave the entry a name. Would of been nice if you had some kind sounds."},{"author_name":"aeveis","author_uid":"8854","time":"May 19, 2014 @ 5:28am","epoch":1400476980,"text":"The different versions were interesting in revealing what actually happened."},{"author_name":"Acuity","author_uid":"34803","time":"May 19, 2014 @ 7:27am","epoch":1400484120,"text":"It felt like the story needed more branches to me, but otherwise interesting."},{"author_name":"Melondonut","author_uid":"35153","time":"May 24, 2014 @ 4:55am","epoch":1400907000,"text":"@wschorn yup. I admit it. I tried to make it really dried.\rand actually there are many episodes regarding this accident so I could make some characters. but I was afraid that I would hurt the families of missing people if they play my game. ....I didn't want to make any unreal character, nor characters based on real people."},{"author_name":"Melondonut","author_uid":"35153","time":"May 24, 2014 @ 4:56am","epoch":1400907060,"text":"@Clinthoney yea it was really strange. I definitely put the title, but somehow it changed to jam entry. now I fixed it. thx for advice."},{"author_name":"Melondonut","author_uid":"35153","time":"May 24, 2014 @ 4:57am","epoch":1400907120,"text":"@aeveis Thanks!\r@Acuity yea I made little branched on purpose. I just wanted to let the truth known. I know what you exactly mean.. thank you. :D"}],"images":["ld29\/35153-ba71e10b4a251307a4ddeae7b71dda61.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/cantaloupe.tistory.com\/attachment\/cfile6.uf@24652849535F514109253D.html","text":"Web"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"19039","g_author":"35153","g_event":"LD29","g_eventkey":"22","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"19068","g_title":"A bot is sinking","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"597","g_commentcount":"24","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/342546\/35153-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"A boat is sinking.\r\n\r\nIt is a text-based game.\r\nI hope you to find out what is beneath the surface. \r\n\r\nmade by twine 2.0 alpha","title":"A bot is sinking"}