Black Bile, Inhuman Circuits by RobotParking
A very(!) short Twine game that lives beneath the surface of the body, in the realm of bodily humors: black bile, yellow bile, phlegm, and blood. Would love to have made this longer, but only had a few hours to work with over the weekend.
CW: Loud noises, BILE MAGIC
Ratings
| Coolness |
97% |
2 |
| Overall(Jam) |
2.58 |
666 |
| Audio(Jam) |
2.50 |
554 |
| Fun(Jam) |
2.39 |
634 |
| Graphics(Jam) |
1.81 |
754 |
| Humor(Jam) |
3.05 |
198 |
| Innovation(Jam) |
2.62 |
553 |
| Mood(Jam) |
2.81 |
517 |
| Theme(Jam) |
2.34 |
672 |
Feedback
I also didn't know there would be loud music but when it came on I had to chuckle a little :)
I guess if I have a complaint it's that the more referential humor contrasts with the rest of the game. Haha, you find a pentagram because adventure game logic. Haha, it's a neckbeard who says "misandry" a couple times. They felt like cheap gags at the expense of the overall vibe of the game. Not problematic enough to be a serious detractor from (imo) the creepiest game of the jam.
Colours, fonts and narrative in a cataclysmic experience.
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