Things for free by AugustSnow

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made by AugustSnow for LD29 (COMPO)
A short visual novel with an unusual control scheme.
It has two plotlines - one overt and one Beneath the Surface...
I hope you enjoy!

Notes:

- Controls:
1.Click on letters to select them, select a whole word to continue.
2.MOUSE LEFT also skips text spooling
3.Press H for a hint.

- For raters: Endings 1-4 are pretty similar so don't worry if you don't see them all. If you saw one of them and one of 6-7 you saw most of the content.

Ratings

Coolness 98% 2
Overall 2.67 1036
Audio 2.11 861
Fun 2.35 1081
Graphics 2.06 1175
Humor 2.47 523
Innovation 3.37 354
Mood 2.71 801
Theme 2.06 1191

Feedback

Caridorc
28. Apr 2014 路 11:05 UTC
I like this game, the story is intense (I love pizza).
Zolkren
28. Apr 2014 路 13:21 UTC
Cool and nice game.
Tanner
28. Apr 2014 路 14:04 UTC
Story was nice. Keep it up! Next LD will be better :)
fullmontis
28. Apr 2014 路 20:34 UTC
Now I want some pizza. The gameplay itself is original but not very fun to be honest, I found clicking on each letter a little tedious... Story was funny.
馃帳 AugustSnow
28. Apr 2014 路 21:30 UTC
@fullmontis yep, I thought of some ways to make selecting words easier without lowering the difficulty (mainly - dragging a line across the whole word) but didn't have time to implement.
DarkMeatGames
29. Apr 2014 路 17:42 UTC
Nice story, but gameplay was lacking. Might have been better as a simple choose your own adventure type game, as it is, I'm just clicking on highlighted letters.
Xaychru04
29. Apr 2014 路 20:06 UTC
Pretty original entry, I liked being able to make choices, there was not a lot of gameplay elements, but it was cool to see where my choices leaded. Nice game! :)
Nicoll Hunt
29. Apr 2014 路 21:30 UTC
I liked it. And now I want pizza.
pancakecity
30. Apr 2014 路 17:58 UTC
Great game, enjoyed playing a different mechanic than usual.
nimblegorilla
01. May 2014 路 01:25 UTC
Hmmm, tried to pay and didn't get any pizza!
AnnaGavaldaKedavra
01. May 2014 路 05:03 UTC
Good idea. Too short maybe.
gettothechapel
01. May 2014 路 12:38 UTC
i like that you took a different approach to the theme.
gre
01. May 2014 路 18:26 UTC
Nice story. The game is original.
I'm not sure to get the take on the theme.
Skipi
01. May 2014 路 19:41 UTC
I liked the story. Now I'm hungry for pizza DX
f7f5
02. May 2014 路 11:36 UTC
I like the original approach to gameplay and making choices, it's just a bit tedious to click letter by letter. Maybe easier word selection mode could be tried. I'm glad for the hints: I needed it to find endings 6-7.

Nice work!
xgeovanni
03. May 2014 路 11:35 UTC
I got endings 2, 3, 5, 6 and 7. I did end up having to resort to hints.
Belvar
05. May 2014 路 20:23 UTC
I didn't found all the endings, after a moment my eyes were seeing letters everywhere and I felt confused ^^
Cool concept anyway, it should be more interesting with a story a bit more epic :p
Jupiter_Hadley
10. May 2014 路 17:59 UTC
Interesting game, I enjoyed it. I included it in part 19 of my Ludum Dare Compilation video series, if you'd like to take a look :) http://youtu.be/KGS8tZwHKag