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Inside Yourself by nerdybirdy346

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made by nerdybirdy346 for LD29 (COMPO)
Twine game that didn't go exactly as planned, but I'm still proud. Set goal, achieved goal. I'll take it. And a HUGE thank you to the person (you know who you are of course, you're in the link) who put my game on his server until I can solve my dropbox/twine conflict. THANK YOU!
Web http://finefin.com/ludumdare/beneaththesurface/Beneath.html
Windows http://finefin.com/ludumdare/beneaththesurface/Beneath.html
Original URL https://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-29/?action=preview&uid=23182

Ratings

Coolness 35% 1798
Overall 2.86 876
Fun 2.19 1147
Innovation 2.60 899
Mood 3.80 87
Theme 3.57 293

Feedback

microapple
28. Apr 2014 路 03:14 UTC
Can't seam to open the game, I think you may have linked to the dropbox page rather than the .html file itself...
Galvus
28. Apr 2014 路 03:16 UTC
Unable to run game dropbox wants to download the html.
馃帳 nerdybirdy346
28. Apr 2014 路 03:37 UTC
Sorry guys, for the life of me I cant figure out what's going on here. I'd love to blame in on a headache, but I'm trying my best, promise :)
finefin
28. Apr 2014 路 07:49 UTC
here, I put it up my server until you fixed the dropbox woe:
http://finefin.com/ludumdare/beneaththesurface/Beneath.html

You can link to this anytime, if you want. It'l be up there until you tell me to delete it. okay?

now I'm going to test it ;)
finefin
28. Apr 2014 路 08:02 UTC
wow, that was creepy! very nice interactive story!
PaperBlurt
28. Apr 2014 路 08:19 UTC
Better to play online, but I donwloaded it played it.

Good mood, eerie ending.
馃帳 nerdybirdy346
28. Apr 2014 路 15:14 UTC
finefin you are AMAZING lol thank you! I've figured out it's some glitch with twine that's doing it, it's been a bit funny since I had my comp redone but it's really being a hassle!
Snoother
28. Apr 2014 路 17:40 UTC
Wonderfully disturbing, especially the ending.
iamwhosiam
28. Apr 2014 路 20:43 UTC
whoa a journey of the mind!!
Thorig
29. Apr 2014 路 07:35 UTC
It is a weird interesting story. Well done.
Newt_
30. Apr 2014 路 21:49 UTC
Very creepy but good! It wasn't so much a game, as much as a story that you have to click to advance to the next section, but it was really great. Awesome job!
Jeffalisk
02. May 2014 路 06:30 UTC
Creepy atmosphere and a nice sense of foreboding building throughout. Good work.
oranebeast
02. May 2014 路 06:34 UTC
A great journey
Penguincat
05. May 2014 路 23:48 UTC
I liked the story, though after the ending I still felt like some things were unresolved, and there were some grammatical issues along the way (mostly in the use of past tense). You did a great job with the unsettling mood. This is one of the more interesting takes on the theme I've seen so far.