{"author_link":"\/author\/benswinden\/","author_name":"ben","author_uid":"11355","comments":[{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 9:22am","epoch":1387185420,"text":"Looks real nice. Good job!\rLike when people try something more complex than\rthe standard Twine UI."},{"author_name":"kristoffer zetterberg","author_uid":"27525","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 11:16am","epoch":1387192260,"text":"amazing use of twine, but for some reason i can't get past the train part, assuming i should be able to do that. there's an $identity variable visible at times, maybe it has something to do with this? or perhaps the theme?"},{"author_name":"Linus Lindberg","author_uid":"20066","time":"Dec 16, 2013 @ 12:29pm","epoch":1387196640,"text":"I like how you didn't just have a black and white console like most text-based games!"},{"author_name":"emmelineprufrock","author_uid":"22454","time":"Dec 17, 2013 @ 1:47am","epoch":1387244520,"text":"Beautiful work. I love the way you utilized the tool (Twine) to really capture the work you're attempting to do."},{"author_name":"soy_yuma","author_uid":"7620","time":"Dec 18, 2013 @ 12:37am","epoch":1387326720,"text":"I've never seen anything like this using Twine. I like it!"},{"author_name":"somepx","author_uid":"29702","time":"Dec 18, 2013 @ 9:21pm","epoch":1387401360,"text":"I did't totally get it, but it's a good experimental game!"},{"author_name":"GarethIW","author_uid":"20364","time":"Dec 20, 2013 @ 12:22pm","epoch":1387541820,"text":"Couldn't figure out how to board the train, but I liked the use of Twine!"},{"author_name":"SnoringFrog","author_uid":"20952","time":"Dec 22, 2013 @ 7:28am","epoch":1387696980,"text":"Can't say I really "got" it, but it was very interesting (and it got me to go and read the story you based it on as well, which was quite interesting). Amazing Twine work though. Makes me really want to dive into how to make more interesting Twine things like this, since so far I've only made very basic ones."},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"Dec 22, 2013 @ 6:53pm","epoch":1387738080,"text":"I'm pretty amazed with what you've done with Twine here: real-time events, cycling links, the weird symbols looking like glitches, the works. The art is very professional and evocative. All in all, extremely interesting and well done, with immense amounts of mood. The concept is intriguing.\r\rHowever, there doesn't seem to be much to do in the game, unless there's a way of getting off the station that I haven't found yet.\r\rI'm impressed, and will definitely read the story at some point.\r\rTypoes: "You are sitting a jet black bench" is missing an "on"; "infront" should be two words; "enscription" should be "inscription"."},{"author_name":"rosastegosaurus","author_uid":"31828","time":"Jan 2, 2014 @ 5:22pm","epoch":1388683020,"text":"impressive, very well done of such a short time. good game!"},{"author_name":"Moosefly","author_uid":"25343","time":"Jan 2, 2014 @ 9:36pm","epoch":1388698260,"text":"I don't get it. I don't know if I was supposed to get it. Not much else to say."},{"author_name":"stvr","author_uid":"26473","time":"Jan 4, 2014 @ 8:21am","epoch":1388823360,"text":"Dark, creepy, atmospheric and very strange."},{"author_name":"nyrrrr","author_uid":"24704","time":"Jan 4, 2014 @ 7:52pm","epoch":1388864820,"text":"I like the idea. But I didn't get past that train. Stuck in a loop.\rAnd I would have really liked some bg music.\rBut good job tho :)"},{"author_name":"BradleySmith","author_uid":"14944","time":"Jan 6, 2014 @ 5:59pm","epoch":1389030840,"text":"Interesting take on the theme. :)"}],"images":["ld28\/11355-dd90e00baf4042a4720d44e539987098.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/fisher.ws\/post\/70137119083\/play-burial-here-burial-is-an-esoteric-text","text":"Web"},{"url":"http:\/\/fisher.ws\/post\/70137119083\/play-burial-here-burial-is-an-esoteric-text","text":"Source"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"21871","g_author":"11355","g_event":"LD28","g_eventkey":"20","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"21900","g_title":"Burial","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"702","g_commentcount":"14","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/308734\/11355-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"Burial is an esoteric text exploration made using Twine.\r\n\r\nBurial is based on the short story Dilitriel written by Aliceffekt. It\u2019s themes surround digital existence and life after death.","title":"Burial"}