{"author_link":"\/author\/nikkesen\/","author_name":"nikkesen","author_uid":"27549","comments":[{"author_name":"Nizan","author_uid":"5374","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 2:52am","epoch":1377485220,"text":"Really compelling, played it all the way through. Great writing - some really nice image systems in there, warmth cropped up a lot, really helped to build a mood. Will make a note to play through this a few more times to see the other endings! :)"},{"author_name":"ben","author_uid":"11355","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 12:54pm","epoch":1377521340,"text":"Great to see a twine game! Funny idea for a narrative, this poor guy.."},{"author_name":"Holofire","author_uid":"14323","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 12:55pm","epoch":1377521400,"text":"Wow, that was pretty interesting. Great little game overall!"},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 2:20pm","epoch":1377526500,"text":"I like the setting, not that often you see that in a game."},{"author_name":"RobotParking","author_uid":"26005","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 3:09pm","epoch":1377529440,"text":"Excellent writing. Really enjoyed this."},{"author_name":"Liz England","author_uid":"22429","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 8:06pm","epoch":1377547260,"text":"If only I had been there 10 seconds earlier...\r<br\/>\r<br\/>This was fun. Pretty much the perfect game to play at work. I love all the repetitive elements (music, &quot;10 seconds&quot;, series of short events, etc.) with the bureaucrat theme."},{"author_name":"Fabien Por\u00e9e","author_uid":"20926","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 9:46pm","epoch":1377553260,"text":"That music is lovely."},{"author_name":"Tegu","author_uid":"27252","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 9:54pm","epoch":1377553740,"text":"I was impressed by the length of the text. Some branches were surprisingly different which is nice. The technical implementation is pretty good and clicking around is very quick and easy. A lot easier than the paper stories where you have to always search the right page and paragraph. The funky music didn't irritate and was easy to listen to while reading. Didn't really expect to see this kind of game here but it's neat that you made one! :) The visual descriptions probably count as graphics btw. :D"},{"author_name":"vladimirdlc","author_uid":"20157","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 12:12am","epoch":1377562020,"text":"I knew that it had to be a trap those tempting offers! But I fell on it anyway... this had a great balance in presentation and narrative, it was really funny to see how you applied the theme."},{"author_name":"withoutpillow","author_uid":"27525","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 10:42am","epoch":1377599820,"text":"the music and writing really fits the theme. it's not often you see these jonah twine games either, and this was very well done."},{"author_name":"Dew","author_uid":"11118","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 6:36pm","epoch":1377628260,"text":"You must be a writter!"},{"author_name":"nikkesen","author_uid":"27549","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 3:42pm","epoch":1377704220,"text":"Thank you everyone for your feedback. :)"},{"author_name":"KunoNoOni","author_uid":"6464","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 2:26am","epoch":1377742860,"text":"I love text adventure, so I found this a delight to play."},{"author_name":"theholychicken","author_uid":"25095","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 2:38am","epoch":1377743580,"text":"Felt like there were some nods 1984 and Fight Club. Amusing writing, quirky music.\r<br\/>Really cool!"},{"author_name":"moomoo112","author_uid":"11665","time":"Aug 31, 2013 @ 9:00pm","epoch":1377982500,"text":"interesting game, I liked how decisions seemed to perpetuate through the rest of the story"},{"author_name":"Jupiter_Hadley","author_uid":"27744","time":"Sep 2, 2013 @ 5:54am","epoch":1378100940,"text":"Finally, not a story about love. I liked it, found it sort of bleak though... I featured it in my Ludum Dare compilation series, if you'd like to take a look :) http:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=O6xfnRK2Anw"},{"author_name":"tryzor","author_uid":"14940","time":"Sep 5, 2013 @ 1:32pm","epoch":1378387620,"text":"This was a nice story ;) Furthermore a nice way to implement a text adventure."},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"Sep 7, 2013 @ 9:17pm","epoch":1378588320,"text":"Nicely made (and with appropriate music!), and pretty immersive, even if the place where it immersed me wasn't one where I particularly wanted to be. That said, being depressing was probably the point. It will stick with me for quite some time.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>The theme felt shoehorned in. The writing is very minimalistic, and it became a bit dull to read after a while, but some lines were very well written."}],"images":["ld27\/27549-6bdfb580d8d6d4942918a45d565678ff.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/bureau10.weaselhut.net\/","text":"Web"},{"url":"http:\/\/www.weaselhut.net\/10secondbureaucrat\/source.txt","text":"Source"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"23258","g_author":"27549","g_event":"LD27","g_eventkey":"18","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"23288","g_title":"10 Second Bureaucrat","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"800","g_commentcount":"18","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/273708\/27549-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"A text-adventure game composed in Twine.\r\n\r\nYou're a lowly bureaucrat. You live in a Class F Dwelling in South Vasilev.\r\n\r\nWhat can happen in 10 seconds?","title":"10 Second Bureaucrat"}