{"author_link":"\/author\/st33d\/","author_name":"st33d","author_uid":"26919","comments":[{"author_name":"L","author_uid":"1084","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 4:06am","epoch":1377489660,"text":"Kind of short, even for a puzzle-based Twine. Still, nice to see you giving it a shot!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Also keen to see the other options of that timer script get some use."},{"author_name":"Soundboy","author_uid":"20906","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 5:02am","epoch":1377493020,"text":"Really great idea + implementation, would love to see it expanded on"},{"author_name":"PTSnoop","author_uid":"11718","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 10:27am","epoch":1377512520,"text":"Short and to the point."},{"author_name":"Jimanzium","author_uid":"24428","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 10:27am","epoch":1377512520,"text":"Rather short, and I found it difficult to read whilst the timer was going down. But, the writing was well done. Also, a little short"},{"author_name":"PaperBlurt","author_uid":"26530","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 12:34pm","epoch":1377520140,"text":"I agree a bit short, but it ties to the theme very well.."},{"author_name":"RobotParking","author_uid":"26005","time":"Aug 26, 2013 @ 3:08pm","epoch":1377529380,"text":"Short and to the point (as the other commentors have noted.) Something to be said for minimalism."},{"author_name":"RoseNinja","author_uid":"27220","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 2:39pm","epoch":1377614040,"text":"a little short but nice game, like the idea awesome good work"},{"author_name":"SneManden","author_uid":"16779","time":"Aug 27, 2013 @ 2:43pm","epoch":1377614280,"text":"Wow, very alternative, but really breath-taking, actually! For a text-based game, it was quite fun to play."},{"author_name":"davidwparker","author_uid":"7737","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 6:24am","epoch":1377670740,"text":"Interesting start... would like to see it expanded."},{"author_name":"Gus","author_uid":"25502","time":"Aug 28, 2013 @ 6:40am","epoch":1377671700,"text":"Using a timer in a text game, that's something, very nice way to pratice my dynamic reading xD\r<br\/>Still don't know If I managed to beat it, there's no more options and the rewind doesn't work, so I think maybe this is it.\r<br\/>Also, creative title."},{"author_name":"kazukishida","author_uid":"22582","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 9:56am","epoch":1377769860,"text":"Very nice use of a timer on a text-based game! It was very thrilling and well-written. Would love to see an extended version of this! Great job! :D"},{"author_name":"dook","author_uid":"18341","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 8:34pm","epoch":1377808140,"text":"Great use of the theme for a twine game. It doesn't need to be any longer, but I think it could be. Perhaps a sequel? :P"},{"author_name":"imef","author_uid":"9591","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 8:51pm","epoch":1377809160,"text":"A bit short but I liked it!"},{"author_name":"Sh1rogane","author_uid":"14496","time":"Aug 29, 2013 @ 8:51pm","epoch":1377809160,"text":"Never thought i would like a text game this much,\r<br\/>Want more of it ;)"},{"author_name":"RHY3756547","author_uid":"7339","time":"Sep 3, 2013 @ 1:41pm","epoch":1378215360,"text":"Fantastic idea, one of the few gamelike twines I've ever seen. It could have been longer (mayybe not because of the timer), but I enjoyed what there was of it."},{"author_name":"kirbytails7","author_uid":"4767","time":"Sep 8, 2013 @ 7:14am","epoch":1378624140,"text":"Very interesting...It'd be nice to see it be a bit longer, but it's a very cool idea."},{"author_name":"lesterpig","author_uid":"8433","time":"Sep 8, 2013 @ 9:52am","epoch":1378633620,"text":"I expected a music to fit with the name ... But it's a nice work :)"},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"Sep 14, 2013 @ 1:26pm","epoch":1379164860,"text":"Of all the bomb defusing games I've played in this LD, this is one of the better. I like the bells and whistles you've added to the usual Twine set-up, and the timer is great. Nice work on puzzles, too.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Typo: &quot;goto&quot; should be two words.\r<br\/>\r<br\/>\r<br\/>SPOILER\r<br\/>\r<br\/>The ending felt a bit abrupt, but it still works."}],"images":["ld27\/26919-54d81cf0ba033b75c585f048eabf5639.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/robotacid.com\/twine\/danceInstructor.html","text":"Windows"},{"url":"http:\/\/robotacid.com\/twine\/danceInstructor.html","text":"OS\/X"},{"url":"http:\/\/robotacid.com\/twine\/danceInstructor.html","text":"Linux"},{"url":"http:\/\/robotacid.com\/twine\/danceInstructor.html","text":"Web"},{"url":"http:\/\/robotacid.com\/twine\/102nds.tws","text":"Source"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"24900","g_author":"26919","g_event":"LD27","g_eventkey":"18","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"24930","g_title":"Dance Instructor","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"714","g_commentcount":"18","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/273708\/26919-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"","title":"Dance Instructor"}