{"author_link":"\/author\/zeelyndz\/","author_name":"zeelyndz","author_uid":"23440","comments":[{"author_name":"Yorwba","author_uid":"14693","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 4:35pm","epoch":1367253000,"text":"Dropbox blocks me out."},{"author_name":"mtrc","author_uid":"12174","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 6:25pm","epoch":1367259600,"text":"Yep! Same here. Looking forward to taking a look once you fix it :)"},{"author_name":"Tigrounette","author_uid":"23034","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 6:29pm","epoch":1367259840,"text":"error 403"},{"author_name":"runonthespot","author_uid":"13386","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 8:23pm","epoch":1367266680,"text":"Dude, within dropbox, you need to grab the public link and post it here"},{"author_name":"arrogant.gamer","author_uid":"22995","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 8:37pm","epoch":1367267520,"text":"I was unable to review this game because I was blocked by dropbox, even after signing in! Sorry!"},{"author_name":"sparkleswirl","author_uid":"22944","time":"Apr 29, 2013 @ 8:57pm","epoch":1367268720,"text":"Think your privacy settings made it so that it wasn't accessible. =("},{"author_name":"zeelyndz","author_uid":"23440","time":"Apr 30, 2013 @ 1:39pm","epoch":1367328840,"text":"It's working now, sorry about that!"},{"author_name":"saguaro","author_uid":"14557","time":"May 2, 2013 @ 12:33pm","epoch":1367497680,"text":"I like the idea of two people "breaking down" to the bones. The concept is interesting and reflects the theme, but the prose is dense. \r\rA little pruning, and breaking the writing down into smaller passages with more hyperlinks, would help the flow."},{"author_name":"Orni","author_uid":"10771","time":"May 3, 2013 @ 2:15pm","epoch":1367590200,"text":"this is some serious writing going on here - I like it :)\r\rinteractive prose has real potential and I'm happy to find such a game on LD.\r\rwell done"},{"author_name":"mtrc","author_uid":"12174","time":"May 3, 2013 @ 2:56pm","epoch":1367592660,"text":"I really like the mood, and the endings (I went back and explored it further). The prose is really nice in places too. \r\rI guess part of me would have liked more exploration, but this is me thinking like it's parser-based IF, which is not the only thing Twine can do. So ignore me! I really enjoyed the atmosphere and the mood. Lovely piece.\r\rThanks for letting me know it was back up :)"},{"author_name":"someone","author_uid":"1207","time":"May 3, 2013 @ 3:14pm","epoch":1367593740,"text":"That was different."},{"author_name":"Hume","author_uid":"11218","time":"May 3, 2013 @ 3:31pm","epoch":1367594760,"text":"I appreciated the writing. However I couldn't explore the game as it felt sexually violent to me, despite the setting."},{"author_name":"MattHartley","author_uid":"15450","time":"May 3, 2013 @ 9:58pm","epoch":1367617980,"text":"Interesting and very well written, good job!"},{"author_name":"Martin Vilcans","author_uid":"10862","time":"May 3, 2013 @ 10:10pm","epoch":1367618700,"text":"Very different."},{"author_name":"[-BipolarDesign+]","author_uid":"13748","time":"May 3, 2013 @ 11:03pm","epoch":1367621880,"text":"Incredible. Well done, I'm happy I happened upon this one."},{"author_name":"Jyrkface","author_uid":"20894","time":"May 4, 2013 @ 6:17am","epoch":1367647920,"text":"Great writing. Sometimes repeats phrases too close together, common rush stuff, but the ideas were well explored and vocabulary was well put to use."},{"author_name":"Christina Nordlander","author_uid":"20504","time":"May 4, 2013 @ 8:05pm","epoch":1367697600,"text":"Spellcheck: "franticly" should be "frantically"; "out tibias" should be "our".\r\rQuite a good interactive story. I'm not very interested in erotica, so I was happy to find that this wasn't your average sex scene. There was enough variation to make me play through it for all the different storylines, too.\r\rMy one complaint is that the writing skill fluctuates a bit. At its best, it's absolutely arresting; however, it can get a bit overblown in places. There's also a bit of an overuse of the word "off", occasionally several times in the same sentence. (And "off of" isn't necessary: you could just write "off" in those instances.) I'm probably judging the writing very harshly, but a game like this stands or falls by the quality of its writing.\r\rThat said, when your writing is good, it's very good indeed. The central idea of this story is going to stay with me for a long time. I also like how it's possible to reach one ending without encountering the fantasy\/surreal element."},{"author_name":"Tyro","author_uid":"12708","time":"May 5, 2013 @ 1:14am","epoch":1367716140,"text":"You're a really talented writer. Good going with this one!"},{"author_name":"arrogant.gamer","author_uid":"22995","time":"May 5, 2013 @ 11:47pm","epoch":1367797320,"text":"What an unusual twist! This isn't a thing that I had ever imagined, and I am always glad for something new."}],"images":["ld26\/23440-853b153030dfe268cd4ba4942fe0664f.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/dl.dropboxusercontent.com\/u\/110018410\/BareBones.html","text":"Web"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"26910","g_author":"23440","g_event":"LD26","g_eventkey":"16","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"26940","g_title":"BareBones","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"362","g_commentcount":"19","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/233892\/23440-shot0.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"A bare bones narrative of sexuality.\r\n[Had issues with the link at first, works now~!]<\/p>","title":"BareBones"}