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Animal King by gabeochoa

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made by gabeochoa for LD25 (COMPO)
This is a text adventure based on your choices, about a falsely accused dog and his fight to clear his name.

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This game is in no way finished, but I wanted to submit what I had that way I would get something in.

I may update it later, but with finals coming up, it wont be for a long time.

All (Java 1.6) https://dl.dropbox.com/u/28948697/animalking.jar
Map (Walkthrough) http://imgur.com/bWLW8
TimeLapse http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XLkIV1OVNpU&feature=youtu.be
Source https://dl.dropbox.com/u/28948697/AnimalKingSource.zip
Original URL https://ludumdare.com/compo/ludum-dare-25/?action=preview&uid=2772

Ratings

Coolness 49% 670
Overall 2.52 614
Audio 1.38 576
Fun 2.46 545
Graphics 1.91 707
Humor 2.00 545
Innovation 2.00 709
Mood 3.13 192
Theme 2.45 646

Feedback

HardScore
16. Dec 2012 · 20:31 UTC
the story is awesome,and the writing is good.
oldtopman
17. Dec 2012 · 03:18 UTC
Looking past the fact that the game is *very* confusing (it's incomplete, after all), it seems that you've got a pretty solid engine. It has a good "feel" to it, and I like the font.
monomanio
17. Dec 2012 · 04:43 UTC
Very nice writing :)
deathray
17. Dec 2012 · 05:34 UTC
I couldn't make it very far.
but if it had a voice-over it could make a good children's game or game engine.
loren
17. Dec 2012 · 06:24 UTC
Pretty cool to see a text adventure :)
jujule
17. Dec 2012 · 10:52 UTC
A truly enjoyable experience. I love the start screen and the font and layout choices. It is not trivial to make a text adventure look good. Too bad you couldn't finish it which make the relevance to the theme not so obvious.
Zazibar
17. Dec 2012 · 13:29 UTC
I couldn't tell if the game was looping through previous choices or if it had reset itself, very confusing.
robashton
17. Dec 2012 · 13:42 UTC
Nice to see a text adventure game, I wasn't able to finish it I kept getting back to the start for some reason.

It's good writing though.
Muu? (lanoiadimuu)
17. Dec 2012 · 14:56 UTC
Nice writing, white text on black background killed my eyes.
I'm not sure I understood the story: At the point I though was the end I got back to the first text.
Cat Burton
17. Dec 2012 · 23:00 UTC
Fantastic writing. I wanted to keep playing! Big text adventure fan so this was a pleasant surprise! Well done :)
Nik
17. Dec 2012 · 23:15 UTC
For what it is so far, it's definitely good.
pl0xz0rz
26. Dec 2012 · 23:10 UTC
the story is indeed awesome, owever, sometimes the game crahes.
Drabiter
27. Dec 2012 · 08:13 UTC
I couldn't go far, but this has potential.
goerp
27. Dec 2012 · 17:23 UTC
oh dear Java, so for me that means graphical corruption.
unplayable (I do have Java 1.6 but I have a lot of trouble with Java products for LD).