Evolution: A Parallel Narrative by Ali Sajid Imami

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made by Ali Sajid Imami for LD24 (COMPO)
This is a text adventure. And I had to cut corners, and a few worlds.
At times, the Javscript library locks up. saving and refreshing solves the issue.

Ratings

Coolness 44% 667
Overall 3.24 226
Fun 3.00 255
Graphics 2.71 439
Humor 2.44 249
Innovation 3.54 107
Mood 3.74 32
Theme 3.46 162

Feedback

zapaman
27. Aug 2012 路 09:37 UTC
The game get's stuck when I have to choose between:
-Time Lords
- Biological Evolution
Can't progress any further!
Karel
27. Aug 2012 路 10:09 UTC
You can progress if you refresh. Original approach to the game, props for doing something completely different AND interesting. Also, bonus points for Doctor Who references.
theomnis
27. Aug 2012 路 10:13 UTC
Really neat...I'm in love with this engine. I got stuck at Time Lords and Biological Evolution, too, but saving and refreshing worked for me.
馃帳 Ali Sajid Imami
27. Aug 2012 路 13:25 UTC
I have now fixed the problem with Time Lords/Biological Evolution choice. Enjoy.
agersant
27. Aug 2012 路 19:04 UTC
Nothing happened when I clicked "Come in!". I was enjoying the story =)
Mach60KAS
27. Aug 2012 路 19:26 UTC
The design of the website is certainly striking; the textured background makes it feel as though you're reading a real book. I found the story as a whole very interesting, and the ending certainly gave me a chuckle! :) I'm really glad to see that text adventures have grown in popularity this year - and yours is particularly excellent! :)
LemonTree
28. Aug 2012 路 17:15 UTC
Very unusual game!
90sml
29. Aug 2012 路 17:29 UTC
I really liked the firs level... because I couldn't go any further eve if I press space :s
And the jump sound is kind of anoying about a few minutes :p
ReveLorenfield
30. Aug 2012 路 15:25 UTC
Cool, I'm a vengeful god, now.
Amazing game and nice use of jQuery :)
CappaGames
30. Aug 2012 路 16:30 UTC
This is a cool idea and well executed, good job.
Puzzlem00n
30. Aug 2012 路 18:45 UTC
Such a strange and wonderful multiverse you have created. Amazing.
matheod
30. Aug 2012 路 19:51 UTC
I'm going to note this game really well because of the idea and the really good interface, but then I see you use a library. So there not really innovation :-(
matheod
30. Aug 2012 路 19:58 UTC
I'm very upset : I love it at first sight, found it perfect, if I always wanted to create something like that, I never get the idea to create it like that. It really well thinking, it's incredible. And I saw its a library. So it's just text entry. For me there no innovation, the idea was here before. :-(
SiENcE
31. Aug 2012 路 14:13 UTC
Great. Would be more cool if you had updated the graphics or css. But anyway ... great to see a textadventure here.
samoojamies
02. Sep 2012 路 18:46 UTC
Whaaat!! The future of book reading. Cool stuff!
evilseanbot
04. Sep 2012 路 04:59 UTC
Interesting and with a good pace

I also got stuck at "Come In!" though. Sad face.
馃帳 Ali Sajid Imami
04. Sep 2012 路 15:27 UTC
Save and reload the page plz. :)
I haven't been able to figure out what the hell is causing that. :(