I Fly Alone by carloshellin

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made by carloshellin for LD22 (COMPO)
This is my first game :)
A bird needs your help to find his family and food. Be careful with the food!

Ratings

Coolness 0% 685
Overall 2.14 572
Audio 2.08 380
Community 2.00 519
Fun 1.54 646
Graphics 2.07 536
Humor 1.25 587
Innovation 1.77 582
Mood 2.27 375
Theme 2.29 472

Feedback

cjke.7777
19. Dec 2011 · 07:42 UTC
Great for your first attempt. Probably needed to be tied together a bit - maybe some instructions or a title screen. Good job
rawbits
20. Dec 2011 · 09:04 UTC
Not bad at first. At last it's seems finished. :) But maybe a little better graphics for the food, some instructions, hidding the mouse cursor and restart option on end. Anyway it's nice!
kato9
20. Dec 2011 · 21:56 UTC
Really cool particle snow effect. I couldn't really understand what I was supposed to do though. Needs some more specific instructions.
JoeCool
21. Dec 2011 · 23:49 UTC
Quite good for a first game. Keep it up! :)
wgemigh
22. Dec 2011 · 02:11 UTC
The snow was great and the sound really helped the feel of being alone in a blizzard. I wasn't sure what I was supposed to be doing, since gathering the dots didn't seem to do anything and when my hunger got to zero the game seemed to reset. With a little more explanation, though, it could be a fun diversion.
marudziik
24. Dec 2011 · 09:53 UTC
The entry would be fine, if not for the music (at the end of your game you state it is done by someone else) and lack of the source. This is compo after all.
I've played a couple of times and still have no idea what do points mean, as they seem to change pretty randomly. Also, the game is *very* similar to what comes out of episode 9 of Flashpunk Tutorials by Zachary Lewis. I know this is your first game, but some diversity would be great.
A pity there's not a single entry in your journal.