Has potential, but is too short really. Try adding sound, music and more challenges.

I like the style and text, though it was a bit short. Also the platforming is good but there are too many places where you bump your head on the ceiling.

Very funny and i love the narrative. Left puns for the win. :)

I'm liking all the suggestions. Some of them I was actually planning on adding but had to cut out so I could sleep. Maybe I will make a second one at some point.

I found your mapping space to text interesting. The platforming physics could be improved, and i wish i could kill myself at the end, even if the voice wasn't annoying.

+ Mapping text to space was interesting.
- There were quite a few collision bugs
- The gloomy-thing was exaggerated, without being funny