This is a pretty fun game, the controls are tight, and the level design is pretty good. I got to say, though, I was pleasantly surprised with what you find halfway through, but I won't spoil it for anyone.

Thanks. But it wasn't quite as ready as I had hoped, and I didn't have time to add more interesting level design.

Also, I fixed the screenshot.

Nice storyline. Good difficulty pacing for such a short game.

Sort of generic, but very competently made and playable. The inclusion of checkpoints alone makes this one of the best designed games I've played yet! Also, surprisingly long! Good work.

Nice art :D