{"author_link":"\/users\/numb","author_name":"Numb","author_uid":1013498,"comments":[{"author_name":"Hadik","author_uid":"1001314","time":"2017-05-01T10:21:26Z","epoch":1493634086,"modified":1493634086,"text":"Simple graphics and animation, but it has good mood :) I think idea is original and fits into theme :)","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Toulou","author_uid":"1009576","time":"2017-05-01T10:24:13Z","epoch":1493634253,"modified":1493634253,"text":"It's an interesting take on the theme,even if the concept is a bit clich\u00e9 (especially with interactive adventure like theses). There is a lot of idea and concept that deserve to be better explored, I like the graphics and sound design, but the control are a bit too rigid for a plateformer. Maybe remove all the plateformer elements for a full narrative experience ? Or improve the controls and put more visual narrative elements instead of text ? I don't know, but good job anyway !","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"gurkenlabs","author_uid":1009791,"time":"2017-05-02T13:13:26Z","epoch":1493730806,"modified":1493730806,"text":"Had a lot of fun with the arcade elements of the game. Some gameplay mechanics (like the yellow stuff on the ground) were not immidiately clear to me. Also I found myself searching for some ingame menu (settings or help) and by pressing \"ESC\" I just closed the entire game, which was a bit frustrating. The mood was very good and your game fits the theme very well. :smile:","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Pilgrim","author_uid":1028917,"time":"2017-05-02T18:38:58Z","epoch":1493750338,"modified":1493750338,"text":"I like it \u2665","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Apostate Games","author_uid":1010525,"time":"2017-05-03T02:50:58Z","epoch":1493779858,"modified":1493779858,"text":"Nice original concept and love the style and mood. Like the other comment some mechanics weren't super clear but still love the feel and style.\n\n------------------------------\n\nPlease check out our submission as well:\n- https:\/\/ldjam.com\/events\/ludum-dare\/38\/plutus\n\nThanks! :smile:\n\nhttp:\/\/www.apostategames.com\/","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Hector Pi\u00f1eiro II","author_uid":1010121,"time":"2017-05-03T02:59:55Z","epoch":1493780395,"modified":1493780395,"text":"I enjoyed \"Pilgrim\". I think it suffers in the same way my LD38 game suffers: the movement speed is too slow.\n\nOverall, it felt like a generic (slow) platformer, but it does benefit by providing a dark mood pretty successfully (thanks to the graphics and dialog). Also, I found myself grooving out to some of the tunes; nicely done on the music.\n\nI would have liked to see a more polished walk animation. Some dialog notes seemed to be impossible to reach, but maybe they relied on perfect jumps. Despite the rigid platforming, the levels were designed in a well-paced manner. However, the \"bullet hell\" portion seemed out of place to me. I can't really say I took away anything special out of that portion, so I'd say \"Pilgrim\" could do better off without it. Personally, I would have opted for smoother platforming mechanics as opposed to a light smattering of a couple genres.\n\nAll in all, \"Pilgrim\" is a nice piece of art and I would love to see it polished up. :thumbsup:","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"fueelin","author_uid":"1013349","time":"2017-05-03T04:04:30Z","epoch":1493784270,"modified":1493784314,"text":"Liked it a lot, especially the music.  Kind of a similar idea\/theme interpretation to mine!  The \"fear\" section, with hiding in bushes, was a bit frustrating.  Thought I had the timing down well, but the parts where you can't see the eye are a bit unforgiving.  One of my favorites so far, though!  ","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"chunkybrewster","author_uid":"1001062","time":"2017-05-03T22:59:03Z","epoch":1493852343,"modified":1493852343,"text":"I was really liking this until it got to anger, wish it was shorter and not as difficult.  It was a very sharp contrast to the start which had me hooked.  Looks great and love the story, though!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"icxon","author_uid":"1000482","time":"2017-05-07T10:56:03Z","epoch":1494154563,"modified":1494154563,"text":"Nice and interesting story. I was able to stuck on one of the platforms somehow, but the rest works fine. The 'memories' yellow eye looks like an active element on a platform (not the background), but only for the first time, then I noticed the whole 'monster'.\n\nThank you!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Poffle","author_uid":"1011395","time":"2017-05-08T23:24:00Z","epoch":1494285840,"modified":1494285840,"text":"Nice presentation but a little slow to control. I would have been just as happy walking around enjoying the story in your moody world over platforming. Keep working in this visual style, it looks cool. ","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"_for_science","author_uid":"1011415","time":"2017-05-12T12:32:46Z","epoch":1494592366,"modified":1494592366,"text":"The pixel art is simple but moody. I had some problems with the arcade bullet-hell sections, but that's just me, I guess. The controls during the platforming sections feel a little slow (which may have been deliberate to support the mood?).\n\nOverall, an interesting entry. Keep it up! :thumbsup:","likes":3,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"pragmascript","author_uid":1002674,"time":"2017-05-12T13:49:00Z","epoch":1494596940,"modified":1494598209,"text":"nice one :)","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Pecolyte","author_uid":"1002797","time":"2017-05-12T15:38:48Z","epoch":1494603528,"modified":1494603528,"text":"The \"Mind World\" idea is very intresting. Graphics and music fits the mood well, really liked it!","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Doc ill","author_uid":"1014151","time":"2017-05-12T19:30:42Z","epoch":1494617442,"modified":1494619024,"text":"Good job! This is probably the first game that I have played that actually deserved a \"mood\" rating. Hope to see more stuff from your itch.io","likes":2,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"pascalman","author_uid":"1009946","time":"2017-05-13T09:19:19Z","epoch":1494667159,"modified":1494667159,"text":"I'm not have Windows but game looks great. 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