Small World of Mine by 0uicmoi

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made by 0uicmoi for LD 38 (JAM)

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Small World of Mine

* Play the game :* https://0uicmoi.itch.io/small-world-of-mine

* Download :* https://drive.google.com/uc?id=0B8zpPygVLvYQbTN1WV9POVFxUG8&export=download

Small World of Mine is a point and click in wich you visit your brother in the hospital. Your actions determines wether or not he feels better...but it can be at the expense of your own sanity.

It was our first Ludum Dare and we hope you'll like what we've done :) It's recommended to use headphone to play.

(cursor don't really work in the web version)

Ratings

Overall 251th 3.591⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Fun 596th 2.75⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 255th 3.381⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Theme 61th 4.095⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 71th 4.429⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Humor 457th 2.389⭐ 20🧑‍⚖️
Mood 34th 4.19⭐ 23🧑‍⚖️
Given 44🗳️ 2🗨️

Feedback

fixedgerald
25. Apr 2017 · 04:09 UTC
Great art style!
Eric Florio
03. May 2017 · 02:28 UTC
The art is really good, and the game is immersive.
However, I'd expected a better ending.
Nice entry =D
🎤 0uicmoi
04. May 2017 · 08:36 UTC
Hey @eric-florio ! Yeah, we failed the endings and didn't manage to express correctly what we wanted. Lack of time and of experience ! Thanks for your comment :)
lebull
05. May 2017 · 23:35 UTC
Great job. I love the art and the environment. However, I had to try a few times to understand what the options meant in terms of the consequences. That very well may have been intended, though.

Can't wait to see you next year!
jin47
12. May 2017 · 12:59 UTC
A very interesting take at this theme. ONe of the most original for sure! The ambiance is so heavy, you did a really nice job guys! I am not sure if there is a good or a bad ending though maybe a little more time could have helped making this more explicit. But this is a wonderful work!
ToonTeamJ
12. May 2017 · 23:19 UTC
Very well done. I think I got a good ending, although it's not easy to tell. Some of the results of my choices were a little...unexpected.
IgorsGames
13. May 2017 · 20:06 UTC
Simple gameplay-wise, but very nicely done in narrative and graphics! Wish there was some music in the game.
mrjoshuamclean
15. May 2017 · 12:31 UTC
Liked the art style, and the sound design was superb. A nice little capsule of meaning and exploration in a simple little package. Good work. :)
MrGussio
15. May 2017 · 19:55 UTC
Very simple, and really loved the art style! These might have been the best graphics I've seen this jam, great job :wink:
binaryferret
15. May 2017 · 21:49 UTC
Loved the art style. Really nice story that's wrapped up in a simple but effect manner. I really liked your use of sound in this game, it complimented your story very well.

Good job!
hiki911
15. May 2017 · 21:50 UTC
Game could be better if you add some button which will highlight clickable objects. Anything else is pretty nice. GJ!
bainerd
15. May 2017 · 22:56 UTC
Entertaining!
Owen Davies
15. May 2017 · 22:59 UTC
Love the art style so sleek
thegdr
16. May 2017 · 00:14 UTC
liked the art
zotapianola
16. May 2017 · 00:35 UTC
Well, this a little bit personal. My little brother died on a hospital bed, so your game made me cry right away. It's impressive that things like video games or other forms of art can convey or provoke these feelings. It's a ballsy entry for a game jam, for sure. It looks like you achieved something huge. I mean, in a very limited time you managed to create an experience, tell a story and convey a meaning. Most of all: to connect with people.

Now, on a more technical side of things, nice art style. Solid ambience work (in terms of decoration and sound work). What else is there to explore? Maybe if you read the story, be able to read the story. Being able to touch or hold the hand of your loved one could have been good (it's an important part of linking with them in that scenario, it feels like the most important connection you can have with them and in the end, it's one of the things you miss the most).

Anyway, thank you for pushing video games to be more. Game jams need more of these entries.
Hierophant
16. May 2017 · 06:48 UTC
Wow, I didn't expect an ending like that. I played for the "full creative" ending. Interesting thematic idea that you had here. I'm always a sucker for pretty visuals masking something a bit darker. Best of luck on the judging.

If you like, please take a look at the game my team made, you can find a link to it on my profile.
koemeterion
16. May 2017 · 14:00 UTC
Great little expierence. The atmosphere was nice and this kind of story telling as well. Beautiful graphic design. I love this one!
Javier Diez
01. Aug 2017 · 22:45 UTC
I love this art. Cool game. Congrats.