The Water Remembers by Kris D
This is my first Ludum Dare. I had big plans for images, fancy effects...72 hours certainly goes by fast!
| HTML5 (web) | https://kris-dikeman.itch.io/the-water-remembers |
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/43/the-water-remembers |
Ratings
| Given | 5🗳️ | 4🗨️ |
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FireBug
09. Dec 2018 · 17:49 UTC
An interesting story! I tried out both endings in curiosity. I like the steady build-up of the reveal, and if you're familiar with the tale you can guess it pretty early on. It's fun, in any case, and the choice is difficult. Neither ending is particularly happy. There's a passage in the middle where the text paragraphs don't appear with time delay like the others, but instantly. I'm not sure that was intended? Other than that, good job!