The Tiny World We Live In. by steven-pinto

made by steven-pinto for LD 38 (JAM)

A tiny world we live in is a short Narrative art game which tells the story of a young man going through 40 years of his life in 4 sequences, and how his actions impact the conclusion of his story.

Latest Build, Windows - (https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1PsVSCg7rEYNTBFSEdDazhDeVE/view?usp=sharing)

Jam Build, Windows - (https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1PsVSCg7rEYekl5QmYyOHhoUlE/view?usp=sharing)

Jam Build, OSX - (https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1PsVSCg7rEYY0JYMFlSV1l3TkE/view?usp=sharing)

Original URL

https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/38/the-tiny-world-we-live-in

Ratings

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Feedback

TheFunAttic

28. Apr 2017 · 11:46 UTC

This is nice, I like the artstyle and music.
The game lacks depth in gameplay, as narrative games tend to offer some choice to the player, I don't see a lot of choicemaking throughout the story... It's more of an interactive short film. The writing is good but a bit simplistic maybe.
Also, the game seems to bug towards the end, I just get stuck in the 1998 room with no character appearing, I don't know if this is normal...
Overall you did a decent job. :)

Feel free to check out our game ! : https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/38/bubblenaut

🎤 steven-pinto

28. Apr 2017 · 14:02 UTC

@thefunattic Hey man, Thanks for your feedback. Yes I agree on the narative and having choices. Although we did plan to have interactions and more but we did our best with the time we had. And that bug has never happened xD Suprising. Anyway thanks for playing :D

thiagowaw

28. Apr 2017 · 16:21 UTC

Nice game, o Love your artstyle and music too..
Great job :D

This is my compo game: https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/38/space-honey-the-adventure-of-little-bee

frogcheese

18. May 2017 · 18:49 UTC

Really good art and audio, the town felt pretty alive. Kind of felt bad for the guy for working 40 years in the same place even though he confessed he didn't like the job. I'm afraid I missed the ending text though, the game just skipped past it and then got stuck on the bedroom screen.

Overall a great job!