A Moment To Reflect by aeveis

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made by aeveis for LD 44 (COMPO)

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Description

You are some kind of bird in a garden. You have been given a moment to think about life.

More experiments in short narrative. Also I'm on vacation so this was scoped pretty minimally.

Thanks for playing!

Controls

  • [Arrow Keys] to Move
  • [X] to Interact

Tools

  • Art: Gimp
  • Library: HaxeFlixel
  • IDE: Flash Develop
  • Music/Sound: OpenMPT
  • Level Editor: Tiled

Ratings

Given 12๐Ÿ—ณ๏ธ 17๐Ÿ—จ๏ธ

Feedback

WongKongPhooey
29. Apr 2019 ยท 17:35 UTC
A nice experience and change of pace from the other jam games. The graphics look great and I particularly like how the text drops into place as it displays. Well done!
Fat cat
29. Apr 2019 ยท 21:19 UTC
Really adorable graphics!
randomhuman
29. Apr 2019 ยท 22:10 UTC
Not a lot to the gameplay, but there are some nice sentiments and the art is really nice. I love that crying bird and the way he hops around.
Oivin F
29. Apr 2019 ยท 22:25 UTC
An experience more than a game. But a wholesome and visually pretty experience
treslapin
29. Apr 2019 ยท 22:48 UTC
Ah so pretty! I loved it. Thanks for the experience. :)
jjjjason
29. Apr 2019 ยท 23:51 UTC
Pleasant. A very thoughtful interpretation of the theme.

Did you design the underlying system in a way that you can easily iterate upon in the future? Or did you imagine this more of a PoC whose idea you'll continue on?
Polkadotbot
30. Apr 2019 ยท 03:26 UTC
Super cute. It's a nice break from all the things trying to kill you. Would love to see more.
Wesxdz
30. Apr 2019 ยท 05:35 UTC
I really liked how short and approachable your game was. You created something great even though the scope was small, that's not something I see done well often :)
saoi-games
30. Apr 2019 ยท 06:15 UTC
The graphics are really well done. I hope that you get more time to work on this post jam.

The text was a little hard to read, but the pico8 type games doesn't give you much options.

What are your future plans for the project?
KP_CFTSZ
30. Apr 2019 ยท 07:18 UTC
Short (by design I guess) but enjoyable, adorable art/music
johanhelsing
30. Apr 2019 ยท 07:26 UTC
I love the crow. Graphics and audio are really cool :)
tammukka
30. Apr 2019 ยท 07:46 UTC
Art is cute, can we get a longer game with the birb? :smile: I spent more time just hopping around than I'd like to admit
Harksa
30. Apr 2019 ยท 08:09 UTC
This is a cute experience but I don't see the theme of the gamejam.
Fenderbate
30. Apr 2019 ยท 08:30 UTC
This is a very interesting entry. If I had to guess the theme is interpeted as this: Your life is your own, and you choose how to SPEND it. I might be absolutely wrong, maybe the theme isn't interpeted as a whole, or not at all and i'm just overthinking this :sweat_smile: Nontheless I like entries that go beyond the usual stabby-stab kill the bad theme.
NandoN
30. Apr 2019 ยท 11:39 UTC
Interesting little interaction
Ekilibr
30. Apr 2019 ยท 11:40 UTC
Original concept :) Had trouble to see the link with the theme, but passed that, mood and graphics are pretty neat!
Linheha
30. Apr 2019 ยท 11:49 UTC
Peaceful games are the best <3
and look at this cut little bird
Also I didn't understand how the theme was interpreted in your game, but I don't care :D
I hope you will continue to make more game like this
Kerdelos
30. Apr 2019 ยท 11:56 UTC
Really relaxing ! Everything fits well together and the concept of playing such a short time is interesting !
๐ŸŽค aeveis
30. Apr 2019 ยท 12:05 UTC
Thanks for the comments everyone!

@jjjjason There's sort of an underlying system in the works, I had to jam out things to just make it work this time around. Eventually though I'd hope I can use the system for dialogue type stuff whenever I need it for games. Thematically as a proof of concept I really don't know how people will react to the writing, so I guess there's that.

@saoi-games The game is done in Haxeflixel, but the text was originally made to be as small as possible, which I would like to do differently eventually. For a pixel art game, I'm thinking it'll be nice if the text was 2x or 4x the game pixel density so things are more readable, but still pixel art. I haven't done anything about that yet though, and localization and other languages also makes things complicated. I don't currently have any plans for this project, though I think thematically I'll probably be leaning on some more things like this (ie. also like my LD 43 game).

@tammukka I think there's something about controlling a character platformer-style that is just fun. :)

@harksa @ekilibr @linheha Thanks! The point is you are given a choice to how you want to live your life. Living itself costs your life, so this was an attempt to make that more intentional while also being encouraging.

@fenderbate Yeah, basically. I tried to dial in on some more specifics of how that can be done- and the hope is for the player to commit to the choice they've made in living out their life. I think this can be hard though if players don't make the connection from their game-self to real-self, or if they don't take the choices they make seriously. Also it can be a lot of a short game to ask for how someone will want to live out their life.
Eliphas
30. Apr 2019 ยท 14:06 UTC
Very small but good looking game.
Good work!
Drauthius
30. Apr 2019 ยท 14:40 UTC
Nice art and concept
Becher
30. Apr 2019 ยท 14:59 UTC
It's cute :heart:.
i love the crow art.
jvolonte
30. Apr 2019 ยท 16:36 UTC
Didn't get why everyone was crying :( but the parrot is cute. Nice interpretation ^^
voidfishing
30. Apr 2019 ยท 22:47 UTC
i like this!! the concept works really well for a short little narrative and it's a really nice, different use of the theme; some of the writing is really sweet and i love the graphics and the audio - especially the little crow!
JediNeeson
30. Apr 2019 ยท 23:52 UTC
Cool art and sfx! GG
Daniel Moreno
01. May 2019 ยท 16:06 UTC
Graphics are absolutely beautiful, and I get it is a narrative experience, so it doesn't need to be a larger game (it is more like a interactive experience, I guess?). The way the text is show is really polished, but maybe a more readable font would be better. I'm not really sure how this fits the theme, but I'm probably not getting it and that's my fault, haha.

Good job!
Kukareru Sekai
02. May 2019 ยท 08:06 UTC
Very relaxing and differently paced entry. I enjoyed the atmosphere the game proved, but I didn't really get it. It felt like I was reading a bunch of fortune cookies, but I enjoyed feeling like that. Nice work!
AVAVT
02. May 2019 ยท 13:28 UTC
I wish I have your sense of color, your pieces are always so innocently colorful.

The experience was simple and nice as always!
Webow
02. May 2019 ยท 20:38 UTC
I like the sprites very much and though short, what is here is a nice start to a nice little story-based game.
MateusBoga
03. May 2019 ยท 00:18 UTC
What an odd but interesting game. It's very phisolophical and religious, very cool!
elrobo
03. May 2019 ยท 07:21 UTC
Really liked the bird sprite, very cute. Also very nice to have the instructions in the game.
Reality Blind
04. May 2019 ยท 12:14 UTC
Beautiful art and interesting experience โค
Dorkulon
04. May 2019 ยท 19:19 UTC
I loved the art and sound design. Super cute little experience! :two_hearts:
foolmoron
05. May 2019 ยท 23:52 UTC
Really nice presentation that creates more questions than it answers, in a good way