Earn Your Life by aCactus

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made by aCactus for LD 44 (JAM)

This is a short text game about living your life. Screenshot (842).png

You can take opportunities as they appear, or you can choose to do nothing. That is okay.

Your choices may affect the paths available to you in the future.

You are mortal, and cannot keep living forever. You are 18 right now, and you likely wont live much past 80. (It's a good thing untimely death is not a possibility).

The game is as short or as long as you want it to be. Trying to breeze through life is an understandable temptation.Screenshot (839).pngScreenshot (841).png

(The music was written by the lovely @manicInsomniac, who was a part of the team behind https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/44/mahou-shoujo-monster-promised-fate . I am opted out of the music category at her request- if you want to support her, please check out that game as well c: )

Ratings

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Feedback

Youpeoples
29. Apr 2019 ยท 22:48 UTC
Its just like real life. You do the things and at the end its just over. Were you satisfied? idk.. am dead.
karmicRetribution
30. Apr 2019 ยท 01:23 UTC
It was interesting, but it lacked a tangible goal. Without any win/loss state, I could just click thru randomly without feeling like there was a particular point. However, the fit to the theme was very good, and the music was great!
jadedResearcher
30. Apr 2019 ยท 01:53 UTC
I liked that it let you decide if you lived a good life or not, and it made me feel like real life is that way too. You spend your time and only have so much of it.
TableGuardian
30. Apr 2019 ยท 19:37 UTC
I feel bad for the poor simulated beings who I repeatedly forced to search for the truth and spread their word. If *only* there was some kind of higher purpose... though I guess life doesn't have a higher purpose either! Dark.
Carraka
01. May 2019 ยท 02:32 UTC
I really enjoy these types of games, and being able to see everything I did at the end was a nice touch. Really creative options in here too! If you end up working on this more, I'd really want to see some of the choices you make earlier in the game influencing the choices you make later in the game. There also seemed to be some random events (family growing)? happening independently of that, and it would've been cool to see how those events were affected by or affected the choices you made. Also, the red on gray was a bit difficult to read, and the numbers were difficult to read as well, so that would be something to improve.

And I also liked that I got to decide whether I was satisfied. Wish I could have a dream that long ... would probably learn a lot. Or faff about for 9999 years.
๐ŸŽค aCactus
01. May 2019 ยท 14:17 UTC
@carraka If i make an updated version of this in the future, probably the first thing itโ€™d have is the option to play without the text filters. I wanted it to look like a digital alarm clock in this version- im sorry if that design makes it difficult to follow the text.

While many options can only happen if you take other options first (you cannot go to mars unless you build a spaceship, for example) itโ€™s a very simplified system, and the random blurbs about other things going on in your life are completely unrelated. Iโ€™ll try to come up with ways to add more depth to both of those in the future.

Thank you all very much for the feedback so far!
Cikyt
01. May 2019 ยท 21:36 UTC
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sylvie
04. May 2019 ยท 00:21 UTC
I thought it was funny how you can do crimes for years and then run for political office or join the police and nobody seems to care.
qlqrcoisa
04. May 2019 ยท 02:44 UTC
good.
Dorblin7z7
04. May 2019 ยท 03:53 UTC
Interesting little idea, I like that I was able to build a little story and read it at the end.
harark
04. May 2019 ยท 05:48 UTC
That was exciting! Really liked the music. Would have liked it if there had been a branching of sorts, where new options are unlocked depending on what you choose to do. Maybe that is already the case, but wasn't clear. Then again, content creation is not really the strong side of game jams. Good work!
ShadowKitsune
04. May 2019 ยท 20:54 UTC
Good game! But there's a few things that could make it better.
- There is no consequences to your actions, that is something necessary in a game, without consequences the player reaches a point of "just clicking buttons real fast" after a while.
- It would be cool to have a more sarcastic mood set in than a darker mood, joking about how life is shitty is always better than just saying it.
- Changing the available options after a choice would make the game more dynamic, thus simulating the sense of action vs consequence.

Overall, is a good game with problems probably caused by bad planning or time constraints.
Codesity
04. May 2019 ยท 21:05 UTC
An interessting Story and Text Adventure. It could be more design, but I Like how you compared it with the theme. Good Work!
Copper_Aardvark_Games
04. May 2019 ยท 21:41 UTC
Really cool text based games. I always love these sort of thing because the visual story all takes place in your mind and sort of forces your brain to create the environment described. Very admirable take on the theme.
heyycap
05. May 2019 ยท 05:07 UTC
Our team toyed with this type of idea. Sometimes you have the same answer twice on the choices... And it didn't seem to matter what I chose, and there was an unpredictable result after choosing certain things, without an apparent cause.
Link
05. May 2019 ยท 09:32 UTC
I bit repetitive, you should add more events. A storyline would be great too.
coatline
05. May 2019 ยท 18:04 UTC
Like @link said, it was a little repetitive and so was the music but I guess better have it than not. It was an interesting concept and I thought of doing something like that too. Maybe make the UI a little more interesting and a sound when you clicked a button. Good work!
PopDaddyGames
05. May 2019 ยท 21:51 UTC
I love the text based idea here- this is dope.
luckyDaisy
06. May 2019 ยท 05:33 UTC
I enjoyed faffing off for an entire lifetime. Felt a bit too real though.. perfectly mirrors my life of crime :smile: