End of the line by dorkandy

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made by dorkandy for LD 39 (JAM)

Your phone has no signal but you need to call for help. These people might also need your help.

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Ratings

Overall 295th 3.556⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Fun 609th 2.852⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 480th 2.963⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Theme 69th 4.111⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 138th 4.222⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Mood 30th 4.222⭐ 29🧑‍⚖️
Given 37🗳️ 9🗨️

Feedback

Mac Dragoness
01. Aug 2017 · 09:10 UTC
the graphics and atmosphere are impressive. really like it!
MrJotubes
01. Aug 2017 · 09:51 UTC
​Very nice atmosphere and the art is beautiful, especially for a Ludum Dare game ! A bit short but with more time spent on it, it'll definitely be a great game with difficult choices to make. Overall, I'm very impressed and hope to see what you guys make in the future.
Shinmera
01. Aug 2017 · 16:05 UTC
Very nice atmosphere! I liked all the extra detail and conversation with the other passengers. Made me feel involved and livened everything up nicely. Good joj!
yopox
01. Aug 2017 · 23:09 UTC
Great entry ! You mastered the graphical aspect (UI, level as well as the webpage itself) :thumbsup:
Relinke
02. Aug 2017 · 09:19 UTC
I love the graphics!
Thuvareyn
02. Aug 2017 · 09:59 UTC
The mood is just great! The conversation with the passengers help a lot to get involved.
NickZangus
02. Aug 2017 · 10:08 UTC
the art is beautiful! the egame is a bit short, but with more time it can became a very good game.
ruba
02. Aug 2017 · 10:09 UTC
Dialogs and music sets despair atmosphere. I like art style as well. Nice entry and great hit of the theme!
namnam
02. Aug 2017 · 10:17 UTC
really cool atmosphere, I would like to see more of it :)
thomz12
02. Aug 2017 · 10:20 UTC
Great mood! The music and graphics go very well together. Enjoyed playing it! Good job!
Poffle
02. Aug 2017 · 10:54 UTC
Nice visuals, style and atmosphere. It has that This War of Mine feel to it with the hard choices. Good work on the UI. Wish it was a bit longer though.
TheFlyingKeyboard
02. Aug 2017 · 10:56 UTC
Awesome mood and graphics. I really like the idea of the phone mechanics. Really nice, grat job!
Remzo
02. Aug 2017 · 11:33 UTC
Fun game! I enjoyed the dialogue and tough choices. Wish it was a little longer.
CG_Fred
02. Aug 2017 · 12:56 UTC
Great atmosphere and graphics. The concept is very nice and also the dialog plays well into the game. Would have loved it to be longer, hope you will work on it more after the jam!
TheOneThatNeverWas
02. Aug 2017 · 13:08 UTC
Really great mood. I loved the feeling of this game. Congrats to the team! Hope you continue to develop it after the jam.
mspawa
02. Aug 2017 · 20:44 UTC
Really nice game. It has a good atmosphere, nice music and a good art.

I think maybe with more time you'll get a longer script, because I like the dialogues and the way the story is going...

I like a lot the interactive stories and graphic novels so I enjoyed this game a lot :)

Congrats!

BTW he REALLY need to change his phone xD it has a sh*tty battery hahaha
axoona
05. Aug 2017 · 21:24 UTC
Nice game, the story is captivating, with great artstyle and audio. I really loved the mood.

In a longer game (if you'll be making a fully game out of it for example) it would have been more interesting if the choices really had an impact, but here for the jam it isn't that necessary.

Just a minor complaint regarding the controls: I think it would have been more convinient to use either only mouse or replace the mouse click with a keyboard key.

But all in all very good job!
BloodJohn
20. Aug 2017 · 17:32 UTC
a lovely Novella. the sound is very atmospheric. great job