{"author_link":"\/author\/thecain\/","author_name":"TheCain","author_uid":"87568","comments":[{"author_name":"mf1214","author_uid":"61567","time":"Apr 18, 2016 @ 10:53pm","epoch":1461019680,"text":"Cool concept for a game about shapeshifting. Would be better if it was a longer but overall good job!"},{"author_name":"DragonZBW (SparkLight Games)","author_uid":"85560","time":"Apr 18, 2016 @ 11:01pm","epoch":1461020160,"text":"Good mood but a little confusing"},{"author_name":"Jordan","author_uid":"43421","time":"Apr 19, 2016 @ 2:12am","epoch":1461031620,"text":"The story's well written, though it would have been nice if it were longer."},{"author_name":"KodingNights","author_uid":"33865","time":"Apr 19, 2016 @ 3:32am","epoch":1461036420,"text":"That was short"},{"author_name":"codeartisticninja","author_uid":"90061","time":"Apr 19, 2016 @ 3:47am","epoch":1461037320,"text":"Interesting and poetic little game.. :)"},{"author_name":"UnlikelyRogue","author_uid":"85728","time":"Apr 19, 2016 @ 5:37am","epoch":1461043920,"text":"Ah, I love a little text adventure. That was neat, left just the right amount to imagination. Thanks for this"},{"author_name":"dammit","author_uid":"37514","time":"Apr 19, 2016 @ 6:17pm","epoch":1461089520,"text":"Needs a little more work to get your ultimate story across."},{"author_name":"ConorOD","author_uid":"89815","time":"Apr 20, 2016 @ 8:28pm","epoch":1461183780,"text":"I'll just echo what everyone else has said - too short! I enjoyed what was there, and definitely wanted more."},{"author_name":"KappaIX","author_uid":"90060","time":"Apr 20, 2016 @ 8:32pm","epoch":1461184020,"text":"Interesting and impressionistic? A really good excuse to be able to rate some games!\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Well done!"},{"author_name":"Weeping Rupee","author_uid":"60016","time":"Apr 21, 2016 @ 4:09am","epoch":1461211440,"text":"Cool text adventure. I'm into the enigmatic style. Glad you decided to submit."},{"author_name":"KairosXIII","author_uid":"92648","time":"Apr 21, 2016 @ 4:11am","epoch":1461211560,"text":"Clever game, but would have loved to play a little more."},{"author_name":"esayitch","author_uid":"16000","time":"Apr 21, 2016 @ 6:07am","epoch":1461218520,"text":"Well-written aside from the occasional typo here and there (&quot;to close&quot; instead of &quot;too close&quot; etc.), and the story had an eerie atmosphere. \r<br\/>\r<br\/>Good entry considering the limited time you had!"},{"author_name":"AnaGF","author_uid":"56020","time":"Apr 21, 2016 @ 9:33am","epoch":1461230880,"text":"Good twine game, it is a little confusing though, I think it would have been better if it was clearer what was going on, but good job"},{"author_name":"zondarg","author_uid":"92506","time":"Apr 21, 2016 @ 7:55pm","epoch":1461268200,"text":"Twine, yeah! Short, but with an intense mood. I kinda liked it, even if the later bit was rather linear."},{"author_name":"bluszcz","author_uid":"55906","time":"Apr 23, 2016 @ 9:14am","epoch":1461402540,"text":"Haha, nice hack!"},{"author_name":"ekkiiiii","author_uid":"50154","time":"Apr 23, 2016 @ 9:58am","epoch":1461405180,"text":"Nice idea, could have been longer of course. :)"},{"author_name":"OysterKLAN","author_uid":"21270","time":"Apr 24, 2016 @ 6:59am","epoch":1461480840,"text":"The story is well written but a little confusing. Good job overall, nice use of theme."},{"author_name":"marmpa","author_uid":"56456","time":"Apr 24, 2016 @ 11:55am","epoch":1461498600,"text":"Really nice text based game.I would like to see some music on it."},{"author_name":"tayl1r","author_uid":"5556","time":"Apr 24, 2016 @ 12:10pm","epoch":1461499500,"text":"Whoa"},{"author_name":"Kate Kligman","author_uid":"27059","time":"Apr 30, 2016 @ 8:13pm","epoch":1462046880,"text":"Short but entertaining."},{"author_name":"fin_nolimit","author_uid":"86340","time":"May 3, 2016 @ 2:48am","epoch":1462243380,"text":"Excellent story writing and use of the theme!!! I like it!!!"},{"author_name":"Uson Chen","author_uid":"90795","time":"May 3, 2016 @ 7:02am","epoch":1462258620,"text":"Great try, express the ShapeShift theme by a Word game is innovated~"},{"author_name":"Nomys_Tempar","author_uid":"44631","time":"May 3, 2016 @ 7:16am","epoch":1462259460,"text":"Pretty cool, we're many to do textual adventures on ludum dares. That's a good first game. &Iuml; should try twine myself one day..."},{"author_name":"Alphish","author_uid":"39564","time":"May 3, 2016 @ 8:36am","epoch":1462264260,"text":"Gotta agree with others, it sounds like an interesting story but a tad confusing. Right now my theory is that the shapeshifter's true nature is a word, or something similarly abstract (dunno, it seemed like the book was the home, or something).\r<br\/>\r<br\/>Not bad, especially for last-minute excuse for voting in LD. ;)"},{"author_name":"jofra","author_uid":"56160","time":"May 4, 2016 @ 4:30pm","epoch":1462379100,"text":"Nice concept, very poetic"},{"author_name":"Jolly Serpent","author_uid":"87843","time":"May 5, 2016 @ 5:35am","epoch":1462426200,"text":"That was pretty cool. Loved the writing style (abrupt, but still fairly descriptive, keeps you in suspence), and from what I could tell it fits the theme nicely, but now I want you to try writing more!"},{"author_name":"avinashd","author_uid":"45007","time":"May 5, 2016 @ 6:00am","epoch":1462427700,"text":"A bit short, but still entertaining nonetheless. I didn't rate you on humor though (doesn't really make sense to vote for that category)"},{"author_name":"EvanEGibbs","author_uid":"45698","time":"May 5, 2016 @ 7:25am","epoch":1462432800,"text":"I actually really love the mood to this. I liked that it showed what you clicked on already when you play through again. Some of it was really great poetry. When there is one statement that you have to click on, it really emphasizes it. It's like a new tool to use in creative writing! So a very cool concept."},{"author_name":"DSSiege11","author_uid":"88589","time":"May 5, 2016 @ 1:30pm","epoch":1462454700,"text":"Interesting game. Well written though a bit confusing at times. Great job anyway ;)"},{"author_name":"glaze_96","author_uid":"46004","time":"May 6, 2016 @ 2:44pm","epoch":1462545540,"text":"Really poetic. Nice writing =)"},{"author_name":"Geckoo1337","author_uid":"35835","time":"May 7, 2016 @ 10:17am","epoch":1462615920,"text":"Short poetic game which is well written. It could be interesting to continue this project. I like your main idea - to do something in order to rate other games. Well done ++"},{"author_name":"dcolgan","author_uid":"2293","time":"May 8, 2016 @ 2:05am","epoch":1462672800,"text":"I like this kind of thing a lot. Subtle, does not try to explain itself. You can take the time to figure it out and be rewarded or give up and play more Halo. Pretty good for the time it sounds like you spent."},{"author_name":"Blobby101","author_uid":"5567","time":"May 8, 2016 @ 8:17am","epoch":1462695120,"text":"Interesting. Definitely full of atmosphere, but I may be a bit too slow to pick up on the greater meaning!"},{"author_name":"Jaenis","author_uid":"36966","time":"May 8, 2016 @ 3:31pm","epoch":1462721160,"text":"Great atmosphere and cool game!"},{"author_name":"SantiHisteria","author_uid":"59433","time":"May 9, 2016 @ 3:22pm","epoch":1462807020,"text":"Interesting and original idea... but I think you must to introduce more multimedia elements (like fx\/music) to make the player feel the story. Good entry."},{"author_name":"Green Soda","author_uid":"64207","time":"May 9, 2016 @ 4:36pm","epoch":1462811460,"text":"great mood! nice story too... part of myself asks for more xD"},{"author_name":"Allorius","author_uid":"93084","time":"May 9, 2016 @ 10:03pm","epoch":1462831080,"text":"I didnt understood a thing but tried to play different braches of story. Misterious and interesting, i would really like to play a full big game with that sort of narrative."},{"author_name":"Markus Brand","author_uid":"25077","time":"May 9, 2016 @ 10:33pm","epoch":1462832880,"text":"interesting concept of storytelling. definatley not the standard, i liked it"}],"images":["ld35\/87568-f1b46289e11d64f0b99a4947203235fa.jpg"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/cornealeus.itch.io\/shapeshifter","text":"Web (Itch.io)"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"4189","g_author":"87568","g_event":"LD35","g_eventkey":"33","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"4288","g_title":"An Abnormality","g_status":"UCHK1","g_place":"1034","g_commentcount":"38","g_site2_node_id":"0","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":[],"node":null,"orig_images":["http:\/\/ludumdare.com\/compo\/wp-content\/compo2\/\/542293\/87568-shot0-1461017958.png-eq-900-500.jpg"],"text":"A short Twine game I made at the last minute. I hadn't planned to enter at all, but changed my mind.\r\nThis is the first Twine game I have made.\r\nIt's Twine, so presumably it's a HTML5 game, or Java script.\r\n\r\nEdit-\r\nAdded scroll-bar. One of the scenes was cut off when not in full-screen mode.\r\n\r\nEdit 2-\r\nMade window slightly bigger and removed the scroll bar. \r\nEvery page should have a link, if you see one that doesn't, please notify me.\r\n\r\nEdit 3-\r\nFixed some typos in the game. Made the [...] option more clear that it was a choice.\r\n\r\nEdit 4-\r\nsmall tweaks. Changed [...] option because I am a very paranoid person.","title":"An Abnormality"}