This is excellent. I love the art style, and the concept is very interesting. I would love to see this mechanic developed further, as I'm very curious about how character arcs are supported for these complex beings. The writing seems stilted at first but there is a lot going on here in terms of worldbuilding and mood that I really appreciate. Nice Kafka reference too. Great work!

Really thought this was an interesting concept and (like the other poster) I would like to see it developed further :D

Wow a lot of drawing must have got into this. I’m not sure if there is an “end” to the game, if there is I didn’t get to it. But I can see how much work went into the game.

Awesome experience, art is nice and concept interesting enough to try to discover every possibilities.
I love this kind of game experiment. Great overall entry !

Nice concept, the graphics are very interesting and i'm curious to see more about this game ! Good job :)

Neat idea, and a nice entry.

This feels like taking the avatar generator many modern games have one step further, where you're not just defining how the characters look, but their backstory and nature as well. Excellent writing. Very exciting stuff! As others mentioned - would love to dive into the story after choosing characters and environment.

Nice entry. I thought it was an interesting & innovative way of developing the story.

I pulled the sassy lady's head off and made her ghost head float around. It was pretty fun.

Fascinating experiment. Would be interested to see this developed further.

I like the mechanic! Great idea.

Great idea, this was fun. Something to develop further.

This is a very unusual Twine Story :D but I like it, great idea! Yes, I too would like to see this developed further..

80 is maximum points to get Innovation: 4/10 Fun: 2/10
Theme: 7/10
Graphics: 4/10
Audio: 0/10
Humor: 3/10
Mood: 8/10
Coolness: 1/10
Overall: 29/80
Good Game