sorry for my English and try not try complete tutorial

It doesn't look like the Itch.io link is working

I agree with @BitJester Media the itch.io link doesn't work for me either

oh! sorry my bad! i think it work now (i not change Visibility & access) =_= @evannex @bitjester-media

Would you mind uploading a standalone (.zip) version? I don't like installing things during LD. When you do, @ me and I'll make sure to play this.

@mao done
https://www.dropbox.com/s/u5nblapw3lbhtkb/text%20adventure%20platformer-Default-1.0.0.2.exe?dl=0

Certainly an innovative approach. You put a nontrivial amount of work into this. Keep it up! :)

Pretty good concept, although I admit that I had no idea what I was doing most of the time. I think some better level design that guided the player to figure out the interaction system would be nice.

I did like the way the game handled failing the tutorial :smiley:

Really nice stylized graphics. Of course the "game" is not finished. The only thing you can do is move. But still I like that you published it, with each try you become better game developer. Hope you will make finished game next time. Удачи!

The concept of this was really cool! Along with that the art was killer! I think a big problem with this is how slow the character moves and how there wasn't a reset for dying. Great Job!

@gavin-camlin yes sorry i forget about escape and restart buttons ¯\\__(=+=)__/¯

No worries man! I thought the concept was really cool!!

innovative indeed, and I enjoyed the graphics. I would have loved if there was audio in the game submission, but I understand due to the limited time, and amazing attention to detail on the artwork. As others pointed out, there is the problem with the character moving super slow. But overall, I really liked this submission!

@gamekrazzy yes sorry about hero speed too (you right have no time for thinking about this) and you right about music but no time maybe later ;)

Nice concept and a very well made game! GG

It's a nice concept and graphics, but the game felt a little too slow, or maybe it was just my computer or something...?

@jani-nykanen no no! it's just because this is a "game" not Game. XD and.. yes my bad (have no time for fix something and now i suddenly start to make update. but don't know how many time i need wait before i can post it)

I really like the idea but the player movement is too slow.

Movement was way tooo slooow, but it looks great! It was really confusing, and I was walking around not really knowing what I was doing.. The graphics were great, and it certainly was an interesting game!

Hi, game to slow, concept interesting but speed needs to be multiply by 4 I'm think.

Game art is great!
I'm congratulate to make your first game on Ludum Dare :D

Look my game if you have some time. :)

Great idea. After the tutorial I made the character go left, and he fell off the screen - Linux using Google Chrome.

@bombjack @ildfuglen thanks i know about heroes speed)
@bcvery1 this is one and only one end in this game try tutorial one more time (if you not try choose wrong buttons)

Movement was too slow... I was able to get the player moving left and fall down while testing that balck area :)
Like the pixel art and tone of it.

@samuelsousa ok i think about make hero more slower. btw did you try choose wrong buttons?) and yes falling is normal spoiler spoiler it's only one end of this game(but it not show score(( )

Having some music in this could really solidify the mood set by the art. Agreed with others here that the jump was far too slow, the player can kind of get into a rhythm after a while, but the jumps drag it down. Very nice graphical style, good work!

sorry if this not interesting for you but... i fix some problems in game and now i think game show all content but i forget what kind of them XD

@bitjester-media @evannex @mao @vilix64 @jima @gavin-camlin @gamekrazzy @raffe @jani-nykanen @bombjack @ildfuglen @serious07 @bcvery1 @SamuelSousa

супер игра, просто вау, 9 путинов из 10. Одна проблемкос, анимация передвижения очень мееееедленая., а так все супер пупер и на ура.

@Rs11s21n I did now... I got Wrong points: 4 :)

@samuelsousa i'm sure you can better! =P

Love the aesthetic and the idea of going really deep, almost meta, with the text adventure mechanics to move around an environment. I didn't know what my goal was, or if there was one, and I just moved randomly until my character fell. Is there a game to be played or is that it, a showcase of some itneresting mechanics? I really like the mood and the art, music would help a lot.

@raindrinker yea it's more showcase because i make tutorial thing too long and have really little time for make this game-play in really early view. btw try experiment with tutorial i think it's most interesting piece of my "game" ("" because still no game play)) yes i thinking about music for after jam version i try to make it but it sound better than bad but not good XD

and thanks for try this)

Good Idea and artwork to support that. The movement could have been faster than I think hindsight is 20-20. Slow controls really give the vibe of those old text adventure letting you sink in pace.

@hopgames i think you play in web version in web all game really more slower(i have no idea why (-_-))

I found something in a bush and took it. I'm still not sure what it was.
It seems that there is no "end" state (game over, or victory) Is that correct?

@bitjester-media yes only score board) it was a bad drawn gas mask one item what can do noting nothing and end game) and this is not bush! XD

great graphics

@p-r ty

Awesome graphics and good genre mixing concept. The gameplay experience felt bumpy searching in the coices menu for the desired action. It a good idea and with more level planning couold become a very interesting game.
Keep on the good work!

@macdoom thank you for good words i think i'll try to make something interesting with this idea! but not sure what people think if i start change game play from time to time...

This is a clever idea, feels a bit like a card version of "choose your own adventure." It did feel a bit clunky and didn't really have an overall goal, which would have been nice. But good job!

@caterein thank's for comment) yea there have only strange tutorial and really early game play i have no time for do more)

I like the aesthetics of this game, and the tutorial is pretty amusing. :)
Too bad you did not get to finish the game, but o'well, that's LD!

@dib i can end it if you wan't (maybe) XD

This is a neat concept, and I love the art style. It would be cool to see this game expanded on at some point. Good job!

@fashionbatman thanks in this moment i still make updates for "new" version of my "game" thanks for playing (or "playing")

Well done!

Very good game, the tutorial is ver funny (I tried to get the maximum of wrong point and I had 33).

Is there a end? Because the only way I found to continue is an object on the floor but when I do "use", it says me: "Try again! Use another way." but I don't see any other way^^

And, the graphics are really really well done!

Very good game, the tutorial is ver funny (I tried to get the maximum of wrong point and I had 33).

Is there a end? Because the only way I found to continue is an object on the floor but when I do "use", it says me: "Try again! Use another way." but I don't see any other way^^

@julink if i understand you right you play in html5 version and i don't know why but in html5 version in this step game load wrong text i think i try to fix this some little later (and yes in last version have some ends but most of them just show score or another text))

The art is very well done, however some tiles can be confusing if you just look at them quickly.

Good mix of genres, thanks you for work!

What I liked :thumbsup::

* Good idea
* Good music
* Good graphics and stylization


My comments:thinking:
* The hero and the environment of one color is sometimes difficult to watch

What can add :new: :
* Control on a numlock keyboard
* Cancel button(4) and return to direction selection

I would be very glad if [you review my game](https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/41/last-stand-1) too:mag:

@mau @darkwing00duckthank you i'll try to make it better i think)

@yohoho-games-2 thanks! I've done what i can in time what i had ;)

@Darkwing00Duck btw i thinking about pause button and about cancel button but not sure how i can add this because the start concept of game was 3 buttons for control aaand i still have no idea how to add tow more
'=('-')=,

Cool graphics and controls, it feels like I'm playing an ancient computer game! :) I just wish the objectives were a lot more clear.

Не понятно куда идти и что делать. И смерть наступает тоже внезапно. Идея и атмосфера крутяк :D

ха ха) так понял ты про ту версию которая новая? если да то по факту там особо ничего не поменялось. досих пор особо не куда идти кроме разветвлённости обучения и заграничий экрана. хотя да добавилась возможность гибели и необходимость найти предмет чтоб упасть за экран как в компо версии) сегодня попробую пройтись по графике и продумать доп кнопки и подобное, возможно буду состаривать вид устройства и скорее всего добавлю пару цветов в палитру... (Ы! тияжко без комнды ХД) @ruslana

что то меня занесло =+=

@rs11s21n ^_^

Really cool game! I like the art style and the combination of themes. Also had fun playing! Nice job on getting finished in time for the compo!

If you could check out [my entry](https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/41/fluff-piece) I'd really appreciate it!

your art style is very impressive, but the gameplay is't that great

@hisfantor can you type please what bad in gameplay? (i need to know :) )

Hey! Thanks for joining me on stream :smile: Was a pleasure playing your game!

Man it was really funny when the guy fell through the chat box and the tutorial had alot of thought into it!

Definately has the capacity to have a proper story, maybe a detective game where you have to find clues in a crime scene?

Possibly the addition of a kind of inventory system to keep track and use items, although this is a stretch goal :yum:

Again, it was a great play and I wish you the best on further development - It looks great! :smiley:

@rs11s21n there is nothing in particular wrong about it, I just didn't enjoy your concept, I'm sorry :/

@hisfantor ah! okay no prob. thanks for try it ;)

@ponchoguy ha ha thank you (on more jam found me... OH NO! XD)

Good job! Cool game!

I left my rating of your game, if you can leave your feedback in our game, Witch's Escape.

I hope you continue with the project.

https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/41/witchs-escape

I streamed myself playing your game. You can watch the vod of it here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xeVofreh9pA

(Starts at 43:30)

@joe40001 oh thank's it's cool! and really sorry for not tutorial piece it still some broken, and more broken in html5 vers (btw i have no idea why most of people try jump up(this is impossible XD) and not try to find item =) ) but any way, thank for try this i hope you enjoy this)