{"author_link":"\/users\/mikomikisomi","author_name":"MikomiKisomi","author_uid":"1000107","comments":[{"author_name":"caryoscelus","author_uid":"1000161","time":"2017-04-29T21:49:56Z","epoch":1493502596,"modified":1493502596,"text":"Heh, it feels like the theme is a bit of spoiler.\n\nThe saving bandwidth excuse doesn't sound very plausible.\n\nA bit of transitions would help to understand how time passes. Without them i sometimes get expression that chatting happens during the lesson, but then someone says good night.\n\nThe \"revelation\" moment feels kinda abrupt. The conclusion doesn't follow from essay unless some part of it is skipped. Password scene makes me cry about how your characters approach security O_o\n\nIn overall, it seems to me that such a story would play better if it would be longer - to setup characters and only then make revelations. Still, nice job as always.\n\nIt would also help if actions would have some long-time response, but perhaps it isn't highest priority for this story.","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"OccultOne","author_uid":"1000603","time":"2017-05-02T05:00:58Z","epoch":1493701258,"modified":1493701258,"text":"I Live-Streamed this game this past evening: https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=sfvbUFJnui4\n\nI admit a few times, Visual Novels just aren't my thing. I couldn't connect to the story at all, it felt kinda meandering and didn't catch my attention.","likes":0,"format":"md"}],"format":"md","images":[],"links":[],"metadata":{"g_key":"47768","g_author":"1000107","g_event":"LD38","g_eventkey":"69","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"245892","g_title":".help (Visual Novel)","g_status":"USEAR3","g_place":"99999","g_commentcount":"2","g_site2_node_id":"27721","g_hide":"Y","g_has_icon":"N","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":{"n_key":"27721","n_urlkey":"245892","n_parent":"9405","n_path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/38\/help-visual-novel","n_slug":"help-visual-novel","n_type":"item","n_subtype":"game","n_subsubtype":"jam","n_author":"107","n_created":"1493082815","n_modified":"1493678652","n_version":"75562","n_status":"COMMIT"},"node":{"id":27721,"parent":9405,"superparent":9,"author":107,"type":"item","subtype":"game","subsubtype":"jam","published":"2017-04-25T02:20:59Z","created":"2017-04-25T01:13:35Z","modified":"2017-05-01T22:44:12Z","version":75562,"slug":"help-visual-novel","name":".help (Visual Novel)","body":"![help2039483.png](\/\/\/raw\/b6\/z\/1f4d.png)\n\n.help is the world's leading advice website where anyone can ask questions and get truthful and honest answers- but what will happen when the people who help run it start to run out of answers for their own questions?\n\nHello, here's my entry for this LD! Will I ever tire from making my entries VNs? Maybe, but not right now. The actual title for my game is just \".help\" but I guess that was too short. The theme A Small World becomes more apparent once you start playing, and should be obvious by the end. Sorry this game is pretty short compared to my other entries, I got really sick Saturday morning and didn't start feeling better until a few days after the Jam ended.\n\nLinks\n\n* Windows: https:\/\/mikomikisomi.itch.io\/help\n* Mac: https:\/\/mikomikisomi.itch.io\/help\n* Linux: https:\/\/mikomikisomi.itch.io\/help","meta":{"grade-06-out":"1","author":[107]},"path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/38\/help-visual-novel","parents":[1,5,9,9405],"love":0,"notes":2,"notes-timestamp":"2017-05-02T05:00:58Z","grade":{"grade-01":2,"grade-02":2,"grade-03":2,"grade-04":2,"grade-05":2,"grade-07":2,"grade-08":2},"magic":{"cool":0,"feedback":0,"given":0,"grade":2,"smart":-29.289321881345}},"text":"![help2039483.png](\/\/\/raw\/b6\/z\/1f4d.png)\n\n.help is the world's leading advice website where anyone can ask questions and get truthful and honest answers- but what will happen when the people who help run it start to run out of answers for their own questions?\n\nHello, here's my entry for this LD! Will I ever tire from making my entries VNs? Maybe, but not right now. The actual title for my game is just \".help\" but I guess that was too short. The theme A Small World becomes more apparent once you start playing, and should be obvious by the end. Sorry this game is pretty short compared to my other entries, I got really sick Saturday morning and didn't start feeling better until a few days after the Jam ended.\n\nLinks\n\n* Windows: https:\/\/mikomikisomi.itch.io\/help\n* Mac: https:\/\/mikomikisomi.itch.io\/help\n* Linux: https:\/\/mikomikisomi.itch.io\/help","title":".help (Visual Novel)"}