For I, The Moon by georgebatch

A short conversation with the moon.
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I *think* I see what you're going for in terms of the metaphor of an intervention for someone with depression, but it kind of runs in circles a lot without any real rising action to the conversation. I don't particularly feel like the characters moved from their starting positions by the end of it. I'm also not clear who's singing at the end, though I assume it's the moon.