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OFF ICE by BMOPAPA

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made by BMOPAPA for LD 42 (JAM)

OFF ICE is a game we create for LUDUM DARE 42 - JAM.

This is the first time we design for Ludum Dare!!! We are so excited!

Except for using the existed audio & sound, all the other assets including arts, animation, coding are created and made by us within 72 hours!!

This game is about a journey of a bear. Hope you can play this game and enjoy the journey.

Please find the itch.io link to play the game on web.

Hao Fan & Xiaoqiong Zhang

HTML5 (web) https://bmopapa.itch.io/off-ice
Original URL https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/42/off-ice

Ratings

Overall 793th 3.2⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Fun 1169th 2.519⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 1045th 2.68⭐ 27🧑‍⚖️
Theme 871th 3.135⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 347th 3.808⭐ 28🧑‍⚖️
Audio 600th 2.864⭐ 24🧑‍⚖️
Mood 406th 3.326⭐ 25🧑‍⚖️
Given 26🗳️ 14🗨️

Feedback

arcadonauts
15. Aug 2018 · 04:40 UTC
This looked great! The controls felt sloppy, but maybe you were going for a slippery ice thing? Either way, it was a little too slow for my taste.
mistersdevelopment
15. Aug 2018 · 04:41 UTC
I liked the feel and the animations! Nice work!
DingoDize
15. Aug 2018 · 04:43 UTC
I really like the art and mood of the game, it could have more gameplay first and then focus on art. It kinda fits the theme but really good submission overall. Keep it up!
CandleBird
15. Aug 2018 · 04:46 UTC
Just finished playing the game and I'm a bit conflicted. The animations had all of the right keyframes, but they seemed to play too fast. The movement felt sluggish, but playable. The tone of your game really was the thing that saved it for me. With some bug fixes and changes to the gameplay, I'm sure this could be a really impactful experience. Overall, very good for your first Ludum Dare!
Silvae
15. Aug 2018 · 04:51 UTC
I particularly liked the snow platforms crumbling. Pace of the game was slow but it looked/sounded nice. Cool entry!
tungunity96
15. Aug 2018 · 04:55 UTC
[I apologize for my bad English]
The mood of the game is very good, it brought me the feeling of loneliness. Besides, you could improve the movement by making it more slippery (maybe adjust the friction?) or make the bear move faster. Overall, this is a great game. Congrats!
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 05:36 UTC
@arcadonauts Thank you for playing and nicely being the first commenter! Hmmmm....we intended to make the bear a little bit slower to move compared to the melting glaciers in background environment… But it seems we do not have enough time to deal with the environment… and just as you say, it truly needs a better consideration for the speed choice. We may update it later in another version.
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 05:36 UTC
@mistersdevelopment Thank you for your love!
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 05:53 UTC
@dingodize Firstly, thank you for your playing. Yes, you are right! As a rookie for Game Jam and game dev. We are usually a little bit struggling for what goes first…mechanism or aesthetic. This time we choose the aesthetic but also wants some puzzle-game playing. But In the end, some sketched arts and puzzles are not quite finished. We will try to learn from this jam and build a better pipeline next time.
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 05:58 UTC
@candlebird Thank you for your playing and like! We will try to improve the pacing experience, adding more gameplay, level design and puzzles for the bear in a later version!
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 06:00 UTC
@silvae Thank you! We like that too! We will fix the pacing tempo later!
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 06:04 UTC
@tungunity96 Thank you for your playing. We are so thrilled that you feel the loneliness! That is what we wanna express! And thanks for your advice., we will improve the physics parts especially the moving!
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 06:04 UTC
@tungunity96 Thank you for your playing. We are so thrilled that you feel the loneliness! That is what we wanna express! And thanks for your advice., we will improve the physics parts especially the moving!
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 06:04 UTC
@tungunity96 Thank you for your playing. We are so thrilled that you feel the loneliness! That is what we wanna express! And thanks for your advice., we will improve the physics parts especially the moving!
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 06:04 UTC
@tungunity96 Thank you for your playing. We are so thrilled that you feel the loneliness! That is what we wanna express! And thanks for your advice., we will improve the physics parts especially the moving!
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 06:04 UTC
@tungunity96 Thank you for your playing. We are so thrilled that you feel the loneliness! That is what we wanna express! And thanks for your advice., we will improve the physics parts especially the moving!
kirb
15. Aug 2018 · 06:53 UTC
very nice graphics. really sad for our polar bear friend!

Would love to see some more animations and art =)
🎤 BMOPAPA
15. Aug 2018 · 11:37 UTC
@kirb Thank you! We will create more for her~
Raccoon_JS
15. Aug 2018 · 19:57 UTC
I am saddened by this game, but I liked it.
Carlos Giraldo
16. Aug 2018 · 02:43 UTC
Really liked the experience. Felt somber. Liked the mechanics introduced throughout. loved the animation at the end.
GhostGoatsGames
16. Aug 2018 · 06:04 UTC
This art is amazing! Nice sfx. Gameplay is a bit basic, but still a great entry
Demn
16. Aug 2018 · 14:48 UTC
Hey ! Really liked the vibes from your game. Gameplay is simple and there are probably some issues (sometimes the ice platform broke before I got on, and one time I respawned in the water..?), but the animation and arts are really good, the sound (eventhough you didn't produce it) feels great and gives feedback. It's a really nice game, and it tells a basic yet beautiful story. Good job ! :)
Gaming Night
16. Aug 2018 · 14:48 UTC
What a cute bear, I was so sad when I killed him ... :/
Really nice interpretation of the theme !!
DarkGuardsman
16. Aug 2018 · 16:01 UTC
Nice game, timing on a few of the platforms can be improved. As well movement is slugish in some areas. Mainly when moving from platforms onto solid land again. Over all good game :)
🎤 BMOPAPA
19. Aug 2018 · 02:34 UTC
@ghostgoatsgames Thanks!We will try to improve the gameplay and levels design later!
Zicboy
19. Aug 2018 · 06:24 UTC
Awesome game. I was pleasantly suprised with the overall mood of the game. Hope you develop a post jam version for this!
PNghasemi
19. Aug 2018 · 06:29 UTC
The challenges were a little boring and uninteresting! but from the visuals and the music, I can say that you can actually make a whole game out of this idea.
shimage2
19. Aug 2018 · 06:48 UTC
I love that vibes so much! Animation is charming. Background is minimum but impressive. The last scene left me with a heart warming. Great work overall!
FuriousWitch
20. Aug 2018 · 00:16 UTC
Nice game! I liked the story a lot, the atmosphere too. The gameplay was kinda minimal but the final part was really beautiful and so cute, I love this stuff :) I wish there was more hinting about the end during game-play like memories or something. Good work :)
🎤 BMOPAPA
23. Aug 2018 · 12:26 UTC
@zicboy Thanks! We are trying out best build the mood for the game!
🎤 BMOPAPA
23. Aug 2018 · 12:28 UTC
@pnghasemi Thank you for your comments, we will try to improve the gameplay later !!!
🎤 BMOPAPA
23. Aug 2018 · 12:29 UTC
@shimage2 Thank you for your like and encouragement !!!
🎤 BMOPAPA
23. Aug 2018 · 12:30 UTC
@furiouswitch Thanks a lot! Nice idea indeed! We could try to implement some hints for maybe some previous levels in the future!
🎤 BMOPAPA
23. Aug 2018 · 12:32 UTC
@demn Yes, it's a little bit buggy now..we will try to fix that in the future! Thanks for your detailed feedback for our bear!
🎤 BMOPAPA
23. Aug 2018 · 12:32 UTC
@gaming-night Thank you for your like and feel sorry for the bear ...