Jerry The Donut Eating Engine Driver by TheLukker
©Copyright 2017 Lucas Fransson
Story:
Jerry the donut eating engine driver’s train is getting hijacked by high technological robots and the robots have killed his crew except for one guy who committed suicide. There is also a bomb planted by these robots in the middle of the train. This bomb will blow up if the train slows down. Like in that movie you know. Jerry now needs to collect tools to defuse this bomb. And he loves donuts and will need one sometimes.
Instructions:
You must defuse the bomb to win. To defuse the bomb you will need all five items. To get the items you need to kill Reddit-bots. To kill Reddit-Bots you need to throw coal at them. To throw coal you must first pick up coal at the coal storage. At the same time, you need to fill up the train with coal so the train doesn't stop, because if it does you will explode.
Controls:
E to pick up coal (at coal storage)
E to fill up coal (at the front, if coal is picked up)
E to pick up donut (at the donut table in the back of the train)
Space to throw coal (if coal is picked up)
W to eat donut (if donut is picked up)
A & D to move
Download:
https://thelukker.itch.io/jerry-the-donut-eating-engine-driver
Tools Used:
Game Engine: Unity
Art : Paint.net
Audio : Audacity
Personal Links:
http://www.twitter.com/thelukker
http://thelukker.itch.io/
Screenshots:



Ratings
| Overall | 530th | 2.923⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 509th | 2.769⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 445th | 2.846⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 589th | 2.808⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 438th | 2.923⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Audio | 397th | 2.577⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 44th | 3.692⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 486th | 2.577⭐ | 28🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 24🗳️ | 24🗨️ |
Bonus points for intro and sound effects :P
The game is pretty confusing - it's not clear what the goal is (not sure if there are, if you could win or not). It's not clear in the game. Yes you've written some stuff here but that's still not clear. There are instructions in the game but sometimes instructions are contextual and only comes up in the right moment, sometimes they just are there and do nothing when you follow the instructions. Some consistency would help.
I'm guessing there's some kind of health system that the donut is tied to, I noticed that he became slow, but by the time I noticed that it was way too late and I couldn't get out of the situation.
I do like the visual styling, background, etc. Could be improved but fun.
Nice work!