Great job! I also entered my first LD when I was eleven. It's kind of intimidating, but fun. Remember to rate others' games so more people see yours!

Thank you so much for your feedback, I had no Idea rating other people's games could affect my game. Good luck to you, BouncePUNCH was awesome!

So...it's a cookie clicker text adventure? Huh. Never would have thought of that. Your story was entertaining :). Good luck turning 43...I hope there are still cheetohs or you're going to be really bummed.

Great game, i had fun playing it :)
The ending i got was pretty funny :D

While i'm not a big fan of these kinds of games - i tried to play it anyways. I didn't really understand what was going on initially, and the abrupt ending felt forced. I think you stuck well to the theme and you successfully completed the game so good job!

That was hilarious!! Great job! :smirk:

Haha not bad for your first LD! I actually love clicker games so this was fun for me. While I know this is a joke game for you, if I was going to give feedback I would suggest lowering the cost of the time warp - it really isn't balanced with the cost of another friend and additionally, I would suggest adding a few more things to the store e.g. an upgrade that doubles the # of friends each of your friend kills (super expensive), an upgrade that slows the rate of time e.g. every minute takes 2 seconds instead of 1, that type of thing - they have done studies and people like watching numbers get bigger :)

Woah very innovative concept and it had me entertained, I usually don't like clickers but with a story the things are different. Good job on this one!

That's a really cool work for a 11 yo's first Ludum Dare. The experience would be funnier if the countdown wasn't so long. 4 minutes is really big for this kind of gameplay.

Awesome job in your first LD! Your game was hilarious and worked well with the theme. Keep making games!

Congratulations on your first LD! I think this is a really creative concept for your first jam! I thought the story was very imaginative. :)

I'm a big fan of clicker games so my only complaint was that I wished I had more things to "buy" in the store to increase my productivity. I totally agree with the above comments... I love seeing numbers get bigger! Maybe the ending could be based on how long to survive Chris Tine's onslaught? I felt like it ended just as I was starting to get going!

Either way, very creative and a job well done for your first shot! You will get better every jam and who knows... You might make the next Minecraft! :)

That was... really fun actually

Though I didn't feel that my ending was so very terrible as the game said it should be. I really haven't played either PUBG or Fortnite and don't have any strong feelings about my partner's preferences in that regard

https://i.imgur.com/OKcc6y1.png

Excellent work on your first ludum dare entry!

This was a good idea. I think you should consider cutting down on the amount of intro story text and maybe adding in some background music. Good job!