I Burn by mamoniem
This game is about you, me & everyone else. This is one of the weirdest things I've ever done, but it's LDJam, so whats the point if not making something weird!
Till the last moment, there were many texts in the game, and I decided to remove all of it, and make you feel, imagine & remember your own stories. This can be more biased to be an experience than a game, but still, it is worth a play! It won't take long from you!
Team: Just me https://twitter.com/_mamoniem
Screenshots:

| Windows | https://mamoniem.itch.io/i-burn |
| Original URL | https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/44/i-burn |
Ratings
| Given | 124🗳️ | 29🗨️ |
Its not really a game, but i think i liked it!
Good job!
Now I'm wondering about the text you cut...
Fascinating work!
My only real critique would be that the flame looks way too detailed for a candle flame. It looks more like a campfire-sized flame. All this detail kind of distracts from what's important here too so if I'd change one thing about this, it'd be that.
I'll give credit where it's due, the visuals are nice and the music, though, generic, is well done. But thats about it. As for messages or feelings to be taken away from it... Well, its a generic one at best. I don't feel that there is any real creative effort to portray something because it is simply too generic for that. You have an unoriginal metaphor (Like geez a melting candle can be compared to endless numbers of sad things to sound "deep") paired with generic sad music in an effort to manipulate something out of the viewer. It sets a "mood" but it doesn't have a message, and anyone can take about any message from it because of just how basic it is.
I appreciate the attempt to create something weird and meaningful in the limited time, but I feel that this kind of misses the point of a game jam. Because its not a game, its an animated short with a quit button at the end.
1. The visuals are pretty well done for what it is. The erosion of the candle is very subtle.
2. My life isn't long enough to spend watching a candle decrease in vertical size over time. I would say "I'd rather watch grass grow", but on this occasion, the two are comparably dull.
3. This is not a game. You did mention it's more of an "experience". All I experienced is loud music and a mildly bored anthropomorphised candle staring at me.
4. I'm not a huge fan of pretentious "experiences", my apologies.
This is a game event. You submitted a "JAM GAME", it's literally written on top of the page. I was expecting a game. So I pushed every button of the keyboard and managed only to open the console and change the camera on the Spectator mode, but that was it. I got disappointed. Your work has quality, but not on a game event, maybe in an art one.