I particularly enjoyed starting on the audio right away. That the game reflected the progress of the protagonist in the game itself. Neat. I wonder, if I had chosen to work on the idea and the game if there would have been puzzles and such in the game too... Anyways, some texts that came after each choice (not that list of your progress, since it changed, but the one about a game needing many parts) got a bit repetitive. But I can see that it might have been difficult with the engine to insert variation there. It would also have been fun to learn more about the protagonist during the jam. Injecting some forced distractions, cooking and such.