Haunted by Carl Rauscher

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made by Carl Rauscher for LD 38 (JAM)

Something's not quite right in your tiny apartment... (a Twine IF game for Ludum Dare 38)

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Game (itch.io): https://itch.io/embed-upload/456450?color=808040 Source :(it's a single html file)

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JustinM
01. May 2017 · 20:38 UTC
Good idea and you really did the text based game well. Only a few things to say. There is a bug where you get stuck at turning off the radio. The way the story plays out is pretty good but I found the dying and coming back to life tedious. There is no progress reports and no real ending so it left something to be desired or know where I should stop. A good fix in my mind would be removing the questions when you spawn and replacing them with an answer if you find it out. Overall decent first attempt.
zondarg
01. May 2017 · 20:59 UTC
Yeah, a twine entry! :) Really liked the story and the tone ("..which explains a lot") and did die/vanish/return several times. I also ran into the bug at the radio twice and got stuck, so I dont really know if there is an ending?