Conception by ToxicComputer

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made by ToxicComputer for Ludum Dare 45 (JAM)

You Are God In This Game and Create The Universe.

Ratings

Overall 1081th 2.591⭐ 68🧑‍⚖️
Fun 1058th 2.449⭐ 70🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 836th 2.821⭐ 69🧑‍⚖️
Theme 455th 3.434⭐ 70🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 1002th 2.419⭐ 70🧑‍⚖️
Audio 610th 2.746⭐ 69🧑‍⚖️
Humor 482th 2.886⭐ 68🧑‍⚖️
Mood 979th 2.664⭐ 69🧑‍⚖️
Given 57🗳️ 86🗨️

Feedback

Evannex
07. Oct 2019 · 13:34 UTC
I was very interested in this, but your itch page isn't found, did you maybe forget to set it to public?
🎤 ToxicComputer
07. Oct 2019 · 18:27 UTC
Im Sorry, forgot to set it to public. It should be working now :) @evannex
dqmhose
07. Oct 2019 · 19:06 UTC
After the second playthrough all the text kept layering on top of one another, so I couldn't really read anything anymore, but the same thing kept happening. Nice planets, the whole thing gave off a kind of goofy whacky cartoon vibe :D
Vhalenn
07. Oct 2019 · 19:10 UTC
Really interesting concept here ! Even if sometimes text are overlapping each other ! Fun to discoveer !
🎤 ToxicComputer
07. Oct 2019 · 19:10 UTC
@dqmhose Sorry to hear that. I knew that was a problem however I didn't know how to fix it. Just refresh the page and you can have the second playthough. Anyways thanks for the nice review and helping me grow as a game creator :)
P.S Which ending did you get?
dqmhose
07. Oct 2019 · 19:15 UTC
@toxiccomputer the one with shooting the red giant. After that there was some more text but it went offscreen too quickly to read. Something about saving the universe?
donut_daria
07. Oct 2019 · 19:17 UTC
more of a narrative experience, but congrats on fulfilling the theme!
🎤 ToxicComputer
07. Oct 2019 · 19:29 UTC
@donut-daria @vhalenn Thank you guys for the positive reviews. Very glad to here that you guys enjoyed the game. :)
Raomer
07. Oct 2019 · 19:41 UTC
Interesting game here. I had to shoot the red giant. On the second time..upps, i should have done it differently. Just ignore the atomic fallout please. *Leaves quitly*
I must admit, the weird spinning planets did hurt a little, some astronomer weeped in his/her sleep ;)
🎤 ToxicComputer
07. Oct 2019 · 19:47 UTC
@raomer Glad you enjoyed the game. I was too bad to animate the planets although I did try very hard.
Edit: By The Atomic Fallout did you mean the bad ending?
W0lfEnstein
07. Oct 2019 · 19:59 UTC
Interesting game. I like that kind of music :B Nice work!
🎤 ToxicComputer
07. Oct 2019 · 20:10 UTC
@w0lfenstein Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
Florian Oster
07. Oct 2019 · 20:51 UTC
Funny game, i liked the animations of the planets (48h to do it style). Good work!
🎤 ToxicComputer
07. Oct 2019 · 21:37 UTC
@florian-oster thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed the game.
Twelvoo
07. Oct 2019 · 21:42 UTC
Nice concept! But in the left-bottom solar system, the texts lay on top of each other. Is it only me...?
🎤 ToxicComputer
07. Oct 2019 · 21:46 UTC
@twelvoo I dont see it. Do you mean when you go in for a second playthrough? Also, glad you enjoyed the game.
Danielcmcg
07. Oct 2019 · 22:00 UTC
Nice story telling, liked the mood as well. Fun to discover how it will develop.
🎤 ToxicComputer
07. Oct 2019 · 22:27 UTC
Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it @danielcmcg
jordanvang
08. Oct 2019 · 02:47 UTC
That was a short fun game! The music is super good, I love it! I think that gameplay-wise, there wasn't that much, but I assume that was a design choice, and it was really cool--and the story was pretty funny!
Human Writes Code
08. Oct 2019 · 12:56 UTC
This game made me laugh when I told the warring folks on the Blue Planet to "just sort it out" and they all started apologizing to each other :laughing: There is a bit of a bug when you play through a second time (events from the past game happen automatically and old text layers over new text). I really like the interpretation of the theme. A few people did the "create a universe" theme, but this has been the most fun one I've played so far.
randdir
08. Oct 2019 · 15:46 UTC
Nice entry with lot of humour but the music doesn't fit for me. Keep it up !
🎤 ToxicComputer
09. Oct 2019 · 01:46 UTC
@jordanvang @human-writes-code @randdir Sorry for the late replies! Extremley glad and happy you all enjoyed the game. Thank you so much :)
BustosMan
09. Oct 2019 · 04:48 UTC
I liked how the story had underlying comedic intentions. Decent game.
Demuss
09. Oct 2019 · 10:47 UTC
Nice entry, music was great, it looked good but gameplay, need less to say it was super short, i would love to experience longer story and see how our decisions form the galaxy, not saying 1h campaing with tons of decisions and endings but like 2 more decisions like those we experience in the game, anyway overall nice job!
🎤 ToxicComputer
09. Oct 2019 · 15:05 UTC
@bustosman @demuss Thank you for the positive review. Glad you enjoyed the game. Also, I do agree the game was kinda short, I don't think I would have had enough time to make it longer though.
Jakob Willforss
09. Oct 2019 · 18:23 UTC
Very dramatic, and interesting in its own way. The music really put the mood on it all! I think the music continued playing in many layers when restarting the game (and got several layers of text too), but after restart I got all the endings. The story could have been elaborated, but I am smiling a lot right now, so that tells me this was good. Thanks :)
🎤 ToxicComputer
09. Oct 2019 · 21:09 UTC
@jakob-willforss Thank you so much :). Really Glad you enjoyed the game.
PoundTheGroundStudios
09. Oct 2019 · 21:26 UTC
i liked it :)
🎤 ToxicComputer
09. Oct 2019 · 21:28 UTC
@poundthegroundstudios Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)
GoupixM
09. Oct 2019 · 21:42 UTC
I really like the concept of the game with the choices ! The sound is really good and gives a special atmosphere. I like being able to play the game a few times to see all the different choices ! Good job
🎤 ToxicComputer
09. Oct 2019 · 21:45 UTC
@goupixm Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed the game :)
Jam373
09. Oct 2019 · 21:53 UTC
Cool game! Interesting choices.
🎤 ToxicComputer
09. Oct 2019 · 21:56 UTC
@jam373 Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it :)
pfeyffer
09. Oct 2019 · 21:57 UTC
The central planet kept exploding in every universe and configuration - maybe I'm just not meant to be a god :-)
🎤 ToxicComputer
09. Oct 2019 · 22:01 UTC
@pfeyffer I have a smile on my face reading your experience. Thanks for the comment, made my day.
LadyPossum
09. Oct 2019 · 22:02 UTC
at the end of the game, i could see what it said first, but quickly the camera snapped to the top left corner leaving the end text off the screen. i was still able to see the ending so it didn't detract from the experience, which was positive overall!!
Honey Pony
09. Oct 2019 · 22:39 UTC
I think my main problem with this game is that it's too short! The first time I played I only got through one choice before it ended. Thankfully there are actually a few more branches than that, I just didn't hit them the first time through.

One thing: I think the planet graphics would be better as vector graphics.
ashashza
09. Oct 2019 · 22:40 UTC
Cool, it was fun to play through a few times and see how my choices resulted in different endings.

I ran into the same overlapping-text bug (I think the music also duplicates) as others but refreshing the page solves it.
🎤 ToxicComputer
10. Oct 2019 · 00:26 UTC
@ladypossum @honey-pony @ashashza Glad you all enjoyed the game. @honey-pony I will look into vector graphics.
RealityCheck
11. Oct 2019 · 12:52 UTC
Very interesting idea this one. I think this could be expanded to an interesting experience.

As for now, I didn't quite understand what to do. The first solar system I played had some events I could choose. Then I went to the other solar systems and all I could do was add more planets and then it finished on it's own.

If there were more events and a clear indication of what your choices may result in I could see this being a lot of fun to play.

Good job.
🎤 ToxicComputer
11. Oct 2019 · 22:13 UTC
@realitycheck, first off thanks :). Second, it was going to be more choices but I unfortunately ran out of time.
daria-toni
11. Oct 2019 · 22:23 UTC
It's not a game, it's an interactive fun :) I was really laughing a lot (yeah, I used lightening)!
🎤 ToxicComputer
11. Oct 2019 · 22:25 UTC
@daria-toni Really glad you enjoyed the game :)
ThePirateNun
12. Oct 2019 · 03:30 UTC
This was a very nice idea, but I think it could use a bit more polish in the graphics and the audio to make it feel more complete. I liked the descriptions though, they were quite funny! I'd love to see some more content in this game as well! Nice Job!
🎤 ToxicComputer
12. Oct 2019 · 22:22 UTC
@thepiratenun Happy to know you enjoyed it :)
Lars-Erik
13. Oct 2019 · 19:23 UTC
Nice idea. With some more mechanics and something to do with the planets it might be worth evolving. 👍
🎤 ToxicComputer
13. Oct 2019 · 19:24 UTC
I will definitely take that into consideration. Anyways, Glad you Enjoyed the Game :) @lars-erik
MrsTari
13. Oct 2019 · 19:43 UTC
really funny game and idea. the lighting part was really funny :laughing:
🎤 ToxicComputer
13. Oct 2019 · 19:56 UTC
Glad you liked it :)
@mrstari
JNSOFF
14. Oct 2019 · 10:44 UTC
Nicea nd interesting game, the idea is pretty cool, and i loved the music
🎤 ToxicComputer
14. Oct 2019 · 17:32 UTC
@jnsoff Thx :) Glad you enjoyed it
asfdfdfd
14. Oct 2019 · 19:28 UTC
Could not figure out how to play this game. :( Little tutorial may be a big help.
nsadie
14. Oct 2019 · 20:55 UTC
A bit confusing at first. Interesting concept but would have liked more.
🎤 ToxicComputer
14. Oct 2019 · 21:44 UTC
@asfdfdfd Where did you Get Stuck?
@nsadie Thx, Glad you Enjoyed.
asfdfdfd
15. Oct 2019 · 13:37 UTC
Well. Probably entire concept of the game is pretty confusing for me. I click here and there. Something happens and then i on main screen again.
🎤 ToxicComputer
15. Oct 2019 · 20:13 UTC
@asfdfdfd Heres the thing, were you paying attention to the story?
lootgrounds
16. Oct 2019 · 13:46 UTC
after the restart texts layer on top of each other and insta death follows. seems like it's a bug, don't know. first time the life was destroyed by atomic bomb though
ItsNotAGoodTime
16. Oct 2019 · 23:43 UTC
Hmmm didn't manage to figure the game out. The text often overlapped so I was unable to read it and my planets kept getting shot by scientists. My brain is too small for this. I did enjoy spreading happy magic tho.
🎤 ToxicComputer
17. Oct 2019 · 00:31 UTC
@lootgrounds glad you enjoyed it :)
@itsnotagoodtime Others said if you refresh the page it works.
Sonnglung
19. Oct 2019 · 13:41 UTC
Very interesting purpose, but I didn't understand the gameplay, It's full narrative?
🎤 ToxicComputer
20. Oct 2019 · 02:16 UTC
@sonnglung yes it is.
KrisDev
20. Oct 2019 · 12:06 UTC
Like the concept, 4.5/5 but there is a bug where the restart of the game stacks text and music from the previous game.
🎤 ToxicComputer
20. Oct 2019 · 23:54 UTC
@krisdev Thanks, glad you had a relatively positive experience.
Dongle
23. Oct 2019 · 18:43 UTC
Not a bad game! Enjoyed the music. Good job!
🎤 ToxicComputer
25. Oct 2019 · 18:08 UTC
Thx! @Dongle
kristinamay
29. Oct 2019 · 16:22 UTC
Very cool idea! I would love to see it expanded in the future. :)