Everything Is As It Should Be by CLVP

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made by CLVP for Ludum Dare 45 (JAM)

🗯 The game contains bad language. 16+

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Summarily:

Eng: ​Tragicomedy about the life of one person...

Rus: Трагикомедия о жизни одного человека...

Credits:

  • Screenwriter: Gleb "izlomchik" Semyonov
  • Artists: Filligross, HNKXOBKA
  • Soundtrack: Slonovsky
  • Lead programmers: CLVP, HNKXOBKA
  • Translator: Daria Dari

Gameplay on game:

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Ratings

Overall 501th 3.51⭐ 53🧑‍⚖️
Fun 580th 3.225⭐ 53🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 553th 3.176⭐ 53🧑‍⚖️
Theme 228th 3.784⭐ 53🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 457th 3.686⭐ 53🧑‍⚖️
Audio 352th 3.382⭐ 53🧑‍⚖️
Humor 329th 3.185⭐ 48🧑‍⚖️
Mood 152th 3.892⭐ 53🧑‍⚖️
Given 73🗳️ 37🗨️

Feedback

Yolziii
07. Oct 2019 · 23:23 UTC
Sad, but nice story (before second puzzle, stuck on it). Nice work!
07. Oct 2019 · 23:25 UTC
Numbers on the tooltip - sector numbers on the dial
Cybikitty
07. Oct 2019 · 23:28 UTC
I really love the point & click vibe and art style going on here, great job! :D
TimoSch
08. Oct 2019 · 00:03 UTC
i got stuck on the second puzzle, but i liked it
🎤 CLVP
08. Oct 2019 · 00:05 UTC
@timosch thanks for your feedback. You can find tip for second puzzle in description on itch.io :)
Stone Pacifier
08. Oct 2019 · 00:06 UTC
This somehow feels nostalgic, graphics and audio. When I figured out the first puzzle I was so happy. I admit I am stuck on the screen with the math like puzzle, I can't figure it out, but something keeps me trying, a childlike feeling. This almost melancholy atmosphere *Unplugs stone-pacifier for a moment...* ponders... Great work
🎤 CLVP
08. Oct 2019 · 00:12 UTC
@stone-pacifier thank you for your feedback! You can find answer and small tip for second puzzle in description at itch.io
Stone Pacifier
08. Oct 2019 · 00:26 UTC
awesome! playing again! :)
Trifectuh
08. Oct 2019 · 01:15 UTC
Got stuck on the puzzle with the wires. (manhood?) but I like what I played up to that. Sad story, hope it isn't autobiographical!

Also love that he's still wearing the Adidas hat in his wedding tux.
creativ4eg
08. Oct 2019 · 12:46 UTC
The best :"D
Xakkar
08. Oct 2019 · 13:03 UTC
Sad story
aisus
08. Oct 2019 · 13:03 UTC
Nice story, nice nostalgic sountrack, i like it! Really creative thing, good job!
But puzzles are hard, lol.
Ekaterina
08. Oct 2019 · 13:04 UTC
Скрепно!
🎤 CLVP
08. Oct 2019 · 13:08 UTC
@ekaterina Надеюсь Вам понравилось :smile:
zimennik
08. Oct 2019 · 13:09 UTC
A little depressing. I like it =)

З.Ы. Сложноват второй пазл. А так круто.
tab1bit0
08. Oct 2019 · 13:14 UTC
Мрачновато получилось, но очень атмосферно. Практически на уровне Левиафана )

После второго рождения у меня, вроде бы, музыка начала дублироваться.
🎤 CLVP
08. Oct 2019 · 13:16 UTC
@tab1bit0 Спасибо за отзыв, не учли этот момент, обязательно исправим! :v:
HNKXOBKA
08. Oct 2019 · 13:17 UTC
Kostavchane47, the best!
vincentvincent
08. Oct 2019 · 14:38 UTC
Sad one. But nice atmosphere for the fiction
Kamuniaft
08. Oct 2019 · 15:34 UTC
"Жизнь - это вам не радость в сердце, и не алый закат вечерами. Жизнь - это ёбана вонь из берцев, и то что скопилось у меня под ногтями"(с) атмосферой навеяло кровосток. Второй пазл сложный. Миниигра с наливанием водки - топ :)
ZMVL
08. Oct 2019 · 15:41 UTC
Думал будет смешно, оказалось страшно, отличный проект
(Головоломка с проводкой прошлась почему-то не с первого раза, хоть и с тем же решением перекликал)
Thought it would be funny...
But it sad and true
🎤 CLVP
08. Oct 2019 · 15:54 UTC
@kamuniaft Спасибо за отзыв! При создании игры мы вдохновлялись песнями Егора Летова.
🎤 CLVP
08. Oct 2019 · 15:55 UTC
@zmvl Спасибо большое за отзыв!
NarRenArr
08. Oct 2019 · 16:44 UTC
Не знаю, заложил ли автор истории в неё юмор намеренно, но мне было очень смешно её проходить. Застрял на квесте с проводкой. Good job
🎤 CLVP
08. Oct 2019 · 17:15 UTC
@narrenarr Попробуйте несколько раз повращать ровные провода, должно сработать
Rayne
08. Oct 2019 · 18:44 UTC
Grat game! I didn't quite get the second puzzle and the "manhood" kinda bugged out. Overall, really cool and polished game!
![puzzle.png](///raw/863/7/z/28e73.png)

Did I do it wrong?
🎤 CLVP
08. Oct 2019 · 18:57 UTC
@rayne
You did everything right, but we did not take into account several provisions of straight wires. Try to rotate them a little - it should work. Thank u for your feedback!
We will fix this bug soon.
NachtWitch
08. Oct 2019 · 19:29 UTC
very fun game, challenging, interesting, cool art, humorous, basically everything any one can want in a game, however, you sir took it a step further and made the game in 72 hours, either you are a hidden genius or a hidden genius, good work my guy
Rex10000
08. Oct 2019 · 19:34 UTC
Great story! Cool game
Diamond
08. Oct 2019 · 21:20 UTC
It is realy Tragicomedy! Sad and funny. And thanks for answer for second puzzle! ^^
vsquitiro
09. Oct 2019 · 04:15 UTC
Wow, wasn't expecting to see such a wide variety of puzzles in a game jam! Heartwrenching story!
mortalfosca
09. Oct 2019 · 09:16 UTC
loool this was really hilarious!!
очень хорошо!
Furraran
09. Oct 2019 · 11:14 UTC
Wow, really atmospheric one. Such a sad doomer vibe throughout the game. Jokes and references are also brilliant as well as visual part.
Puzzles are really challenging tho. You must be real high intellectuals, guys. :D
Great work!
🎤 CLVP
09. Oct 2019 · 11:52 UTC
@furraran Thank you very much for your feedback!
HiveMinds
09. Oct 2019 · 20:06 UTC
Really cool entry!!

I liked the story attempting to fit the theme.

The audio and graphics also helped set the mood well.


I really enjoyed the numerous little puzzles and how unique each one was.
Though the 2nd one I sadly couldn't understand even with the hint. The visuals and hints present weren't enolugh to make it clear what it was I was interacting with and what I was trying to accomplish.


I also really liked the dialogue system really neat!
I tried to do something similar in my entry,
couldn't get the timed text scroll as well as I wanted, so ended up scrapping part of the logic haha.
bryvox
09. Oct 2019 · 20:10 UTC
I dig the vibe on this one! Puzzles were challenging and I got stuck on the wire puzzle section as well, but after some extra rotating it worked and I was able to finish the game. Great work :)
Keppu
10. Oct 2019 · 07:25 UTC
It's really nice to have games coming from Russia. They always have fresh flavor and angle of approach. The game seems to have good amount of social commentary, which I would have liked to explore more. Instead I got stuck in the first puzzle. I felt the game wasn't communicating what the numbers meant, clearly enough.

Graphics were decent and the music was atmospheric. I also liked the idea of starting as a newborn, from "nothing".
W0lfEnstein
10. Oct 2019 · 13:34 UTC
Ох, насколько атмосферная и жизненная игра. Очень приятные арты и пиксельный стиль, да и музыка довольно сильно влияет на всё восприятие. В плане геймплея, к сожалению, не столь очевидные задачи: к примеру, я так и не понял про пистолет :D. На самом деле, очень приятно видеть игры со смыслом, да ещё и с небольшим юмором, да ещё и с приятной визуальной составляющей, да ещё и от русских разработчиков :). Пожалуй, одна из лучших для меня игр на всём джеме. Найс ворк^^
🎤 CLVP
10. Oct 2019 · 17:13 UTC
@w0lfenstein Спасибо большое за отзыв!
Rosik
27. Oct 2019 · 19:57 UTC
Интересная зацикленная интерпретация темы получилась через сюжет. По поводу геймплея, так же как многие застревал на втором пазле без подсказки. Кстати, если начать новую игру по второму разу, то музыка накладывается сама на себя.