The Lost Letters of Harry Williams by givit-game-studios
The Lost Letters of Harry Williams is a first person experience for Ludum Dare 45. You play as Leonard, your main mission is to find Harry Williams. He left clues of his where about in letters. Follow the clues carefully.
FEATURES
Dynamic Weather System First Person game play Day and night cycle
PLEASE TAKE YOUR TIME TO PLAY THIS GAME. THE END WILL MAKE IT REWARDING.
Ratings
| Overall | 999th | 2.891⭐ | 25🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 1093th | 2.326⭐ | 25🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 1064th | 2.364⭐ | 24🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 1013th | 2.565⭐ | 25🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 566th | 3.5⭐ | 25🧑⚖️ |
| Audio | 509th | 3.087⭐ | 25🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 840th | 2⭐ | 20🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 510th | 3.391⭐ | 25🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 17🗳️ | 27🗨️ |
Any advice ?
The game looks good !
As to the gameplay, well, following letters is tried-and-true of course, although you really need to place the second letter somewhere -much- closer. I finished the game without finding it! In fact, I finished the game by just finding three letters (4, but I couldn't pick one of them up). As such, the story was - to say the least - a bit disjointed. But I do hope Leonard finds peace!
I think the game would benefit from more distinct clues, or specific landmarks, instead of just "go X direction", but I didn't get to experience much ultimately, so it's hard to judge properly.
I appreciated the idea, though!
you did not create the grass, trees, ground textures flowers etc. These are all standard assets that come with gaia.
I don't think you were trying "fool" anyone, I just think you are unaware that you have to opt out of the graphic section if you did not create the assets yourself. Same goes probably for the audio.
Please still opt out, you still have the option on your game page. It is unfair to all the creators that spend their time creating assets. I myself used premade assets (some of which are the same as yours, that's how i know for sure), which is why I opted out of said categories.