Primordial by Muse en Lystrala

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made by Muse en Lystrala for Ludum Dare 45 (COMPO)

Primordial is an interactive tale of creation in the Greek cosmology.

This is the very first game I have ever built alone! This is an interactive tale more than it is a game, but I had such a great time building Primordial that I have definite plans to continue developing it. I hope you enjoy this little game I've built and that you'll follow me on Itch.io for further developments!

Ratings

Given 4🗳️ 7🗨️

Feedback

Beshr Kayali
07. Oct 2019 · 19:18 UTC
Nice work! I liked reading the story and the sketches were nice and appropriate :) I'd like to see a more fleshed out version of this :)
🎤 Muse en Lystrala
07. Oct 2019 · 21:50 UTC
Thank you! I definitely plan to continue work on this game and will upload future builds on Itch!
Omiya Games
11. Oct 2019 · 04:11 UTC
Daw, it ended just as it begun. Knowing your schedule at the time, I'm pretty impressed by the final product. The story is really cool, and the writing kept me interested; however, given the lack of choices the player could make, it did feel like reading a story than a choose-your-own adventure I've come to expect in visual novels. Hope to see more from this project soon!
dreamlogician
14. Oct 2019 · 21:59 UTC
Nice writing and character designs! I appreciate that you chose a creation myth as the concept for your first solo game project. Feels appropriate. :milky_way:

If you decide to add more interactive elements, it feels like there's ample opportunity to allow players to take a more active role in the process of creation. The context of creating new life/planets/concepts could provide players with a variety of interesting and expressive choices to make. Either way, I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this project in the future! :star: