A Ghost with Alzheimer's by POBIX
In this game you play as a ghost who has just recently died in a dungeon. There's only one thing standing between you and the gates of heaven - you have Alzheimer's disease. Every time you jump, move or shoot you immediately forget that you did that, and do it again, until you do something else - making you Stuck in a loop. But that won't stop you! (or at least we hope it won't).
Keybindings: A/D - Moving Space/W - Jumping Left Mouse Button - Shooting
Ratings
| Overall | 1056th | 3.333⭐ | 26🧑⚖️ |
| Fun | 889th | 3.271⭐ | 26🧑⚖️ |
| Innovation | 1250th | 2.891⭐ | 25🧑⚖️ |
| Theme | 1106th | 3.318⭐ | 24🧑⚖️ |
| Graphics | 693th | 3.68⭐ | 27🧑⚖️ |
| Audio | 445th | 3.583⭐ | 26🧑⚖️ |
| Humor | 663th | 2.87⭐ | 25🧑⚖️ |
| Mood | 894th | 3.304⭐ | 25🧑⚖️ |
| Given | 36🗳️ | 22🗨️ |
The piano track is really soothing which is pleasant to listen too!
that said I do really like the graphics and the idea is pretty fun, too bad it's kind of held back by some clunky controls
What would I personally do to add freedom of expression?
Perhaps shooting could knock the player character away from the direction of the shot, allowing for more mid-air movement (a sort of reverse dash, that fires the projectile forwards).
I would put more thought into the level design to try and test the player's mastery of the mechanics. it felt like you placed a random set of towers clustered with enemies on top, and the goal was to just jump up in front of them until you had shot them all. Tighter level design that on the surface requires specific execution of moves (but with a broadness of mechanical design that allows for the freedom of expression I mentioned above), often creates more of a feeling of satisfaction than a large playground in which to run wild. Particularly in the platforming genre, I find this to be the case. If you haven't played Celeste, I highly recommend it, it's a masterclass in platforming level design and mechanics.
The aiming element of the shooting mechanic felt like a weird choice - perhaps constraining it to only being able to shoot left or right would make it more straight forward to play, giving the player fewer things to worry about. In addition, I found myself unable to shoot left, which I think must have been a bug.
I hope you take these comments as constructive rather than negative, you worked super hard and created a game, and you should be proud of your efforts.
And by playing the game... I think it's the case, a bit too restrictive.
Maybe you have to adapt the level design in order to not be frustrating when we play, because atm it is a bit frustrating (and it remove some fun...)
Also, I almost never succeed to pass the spikes without take 1 hit, even if I wait for my jump to put me at the top of the level... Some LD problems I think.
Overall it's a good idea, but maybe you have to rework a bit the level design, to be funnier and less restricive.
Music is awesome, and graphics are good tho !