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Corporate Slave Rabbit by JoshuaRabbit

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made by JoshuaRabbit for Ludum Dare 46 (COMPO)

What is 'alive'? In my view, 'alive' can be defined as physically alive or spiritually alive. This game is about a corporate slave struggling from being spiritually death, and you need to help him find the balance point between rest and work to keep both spiritually and physically alive. This game is super, super short and you can reach 3 ending in about 5 minutes , just by choosing different choices. It is my first time using my voice to make the game sound. It should have Day2 Part originally, but I don't have enough time for I am also a corporate slave.

PC Controls: Left Mouse Button -- Click, click and click.ld46cover.pngcompany.JPGhome.JPGboast.JPGendae.JPG

Youtube https://joshuarabbit.itch.io/corporate-slave-rabbit
Youtube https://joshuarabbit.itch.io/corporate-slave-rabbit
Youtube https://joshuarabbit.itch.io/corporate-slave-rabbit
Original URL https://ldjam.com/events/ludum-dare/46/corporate-slave-rabbit

Ratings

Overall 385th 3.575⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Fun 588th 3.2⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Innovation 573th 3.225⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Theme 205th 4⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Graphics 246th 3.825⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Audio 288th 3.421⭐ 21🧑‍⚖️
Humor 150th 3.575⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Mood 149th 3.725⭐ 22🧑‍⚖️
Given 17🗳️ 13🗨️

Feedback

Fictions
20. Apr 2020 · 09:15 UTC
KAWAII! Amazing graphic novel, with lots of inspiration of japanese culture. I loved it :heart:
Kittennation
20. Apr 2020 · 13:24 UTC
My screen is too small ... i can't read text :/ So i'm not able to give you any rating ...
Fix that to scale on screen and i'll rate your novel
Millhow
20. Apr 2020 · 13:31 UTC
Really cool, I appreciate the story and the game play
It's an interesting using of the theme, and it's original
Story telling and graphics are really nice !
Great Job !
thx4nothing
20. Apr 2020 · 13:36 UTC
Cute graphics and the story carries a deep meaning. I think it is cool that there are multiple endings. Even for a small game it has replayability ^^
🎤 JoshuaRabbit
20. Apr 2020 · 15:42 UTC
@kittennation Sorry for causing inconvenience and I updated the Html version on the itch. Thank you for pointing out this problems!
Kittennation
20. Apr 2020 · 15:56 UTC
@joshuarabbit it's okay i was able to find the 3 ends of your "game" !
It's fresh and different, but i like it !
For the gameplay ... erf xD
Is it an autobiographic game/novel ?
I think you can make a full visual novel with more time

Good job ! and continue ! I hope you'll be present for the next Jam (and mister Rabbit too)
Sarrixx
20. Apr 2020 · 16:59 UTC
Cool little game, very short but still an interesting piece of 'interactive' fiction. Graphics are well done, and I thought you did a good job with the voice overs - kudos!
Ruoyu
21. Apr 2020 · 13:38 UTC
Very interesting entry indeed. The sound production is an admirable effort. The game is small and short but it can be easily expanded and enriched. Good job.
fazz
21. Apr 2020 · 13:42 UTC
My first readthrough I managed to die within about 30 seconds. Poor rabbit. Love the art style! Reminds me of that paper cut-out animation style.
mudlee
21. Apr 2020 · 13:48 UTC
what a great concept. I wish you could add more "levels". But I know, that would hurt the dayjob ;)
Giordas
21. Apr 2020 · 13:52 UTC
It gives off an interesing vibe and really makes you think. I hope you will continue it some day!
junior23419
21. Apr 2020 · 13:55 UTC
i like the idea of black and white represent death in your soul. The graphics are beautiful.
Hanamigi
21. Apr 2020 · 14:22 UTC
Interesting game with a message that I find naive and self-defeating. Seems autobiographical. I liked the sound design, and the graphics are ok. Suggestion: after asking the player if they would rather sleep or draw, put "sleep" and "draw" as possible answers, not "yes" or "no", because the player is making a choice between two options, not answering a yes or no question (e.g. "do you want apples or pears?" will be answered with either of those fruits, not with a yes/no).
Andrew-David
21. Apr 2020 · 16:44 UTC
This Game was fun and hilarious. Loves the anime style voice acting and played through all three endings. Keep it up
blobo
25. Apr 2020 · 05:35 UTC
I love the take on the theme! Cool game, and the artwork was cute.
dualtagh
27. Apr 2020 · 10:02 UTC
Love the art style combining the photos and hand drawn
AguaHervida
28. Apr 2020 · 01:50 UTC
The sound FX are great xD, the game is pretty simple, but the message is powerful, great job, perhaps adding a bit more complexity in the mini-game area, such as doulbe life pillows or something like that could make the game to be a little more interesting. Great experience and a nice aesthetic for a jam, congratulations :)
cheesepencil
28. Apr 2020 · 04:08 UTC
Compo is so tough, there is just never enough time for everything you want, and often not enough time for just the things you need. This entry is endearing with its visual style and I am a sucker for compo games with a bigger story to tell. This game had it. I liked it a lot, even if it is short and sweet. I hope you do more Ludum Dares because I'd like to see more of your work.
eduardogacn
28. Apr 2020 · 06:35 UTC
i liked idea
Laura del Pino
28. Apr 2020 · 07:06 UTC
Nice game! I liked the idea and the graphics are curious :) The "battle" dinamic in the computer was fantastic. I miss a audio loop to keep the atmosfere but overall it's a really good entry. Congratulations.
Zitao YE
09. May 2020 · 14:49 UTC
很赞的可爱画风，结合了现实拍摄的场景和简笔画，小兔子和绿色地植物是一个很好的开头，有些戛然而止，并且使用了很简单的分支，以及很简单的小游戏的设计，有提高的空间，音效蛮可爱的。加油！