{"author_link":"\/users\/jabdownsmash","author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","comments":[{"author_name":"DigitalLimestone","author_uid":"1122540","time":"2020-04-20T07:22:23Z","epoch":1587367343,"modified":1587367343,"text":"Cool game! The art's very nice and the game's quite fun to play. You could have maybe added in a few more conditions because the game was very short to play. But, good job!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"JonahSenzel","author_uid":"1052143","time":"2020-04-20T07:40:43Z","epoch":1587368443,"modified":1587368443,"text":"interesting narrative stuff, also like the art style. Would love some sounds! The title music is great but would have preffered a silent title and in game music ","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-20T07:49:07Z","epoch":1587368947,"modified":1587368947,"text":"@digitallimestone @jonahsenzel Thanks for playing!!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-20T07:51:45Z","epoch":1587369105,"modified":1587369105,"text":"@jonahsenzel Sounds were the very next thing to be added, I swear! I even already had laser sounds and sparking sounds ready :disappointed_relieved: \n\nThanks for your op on music, I wasn't sure if it would feel right in-game~","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"JonahSenzel","author_uid":"1052143","time":"2020-04-20T08:13:27Z","epoch":1587370407,"modified":1587370407,"text":"@jabdownsmash post jam version!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-20T08:41:38Z","epoch":1587372098,"modified":1587372098,"text":"@jonahsenzel :smiley: \n\nI found this method of storytelling really fun to work with, I really hope I can expand on this. Just a few sound effects would help me push the story so so much further!","likes":0,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"munmungames","author_uid":"1184384","time":"2020-04-20T09:14:55Z","epoch":1587374095,"modified":1587374095,"text":"Interesting concept ! I also worked with hand drawn graphics :smile: \nYour game would need a little bit more polish (background music, better treatment for the drawings, more effects and stuffs on the screen maybe ?). The narration is great !","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"GameGenesis","author_uid":"1169789","time":"2020-04-20T09:29:58Z","epoch":1587374998,"modified":1587374998,"text":"I quite liked the story line, very well written. And the art style is really nice as well. I would say, though, that there is a lack of audio-visual feedback. When I hit the flame I don't know what is happening, did I hit it or not, but it is a 48 hr jam so that doesn't give much time. Also, the gameplay loop gets a bit stiff after a while without a sort of lose state. In general, though, it's a pretty great and innovative game. All in all, the game is well made.","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-20T09:35:29Z","epoch":1587375329,"modified":1587375329,"text":"@munmungames @gamegenesis Thanks for playing~","likes":0,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-20T09:36:32Z","epoch":1587375392,"modified":1587375451,"text":"@gamegenesis Ah! Great feedback, thank you. It seems like it might not be clear that \"simulation resetting\" means that you lost and it's starting over. I think some visual progress bar would go a long way.","likes":0,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-20T09:38:04Z","epoch":1587375484,"modified":1587375484,"text":"@munmungames Yeah hand drawn graphics!! :hand_splayed: So much more fun to split attention between a keyboard and some physical media.\n","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Kontroman","author_uid":"1005423","time":"2020-04-20T10:03:32Z","epoch":1587377012,"modified":1587377012,"text":"i like the graphic and sound, but i didnt understand if there a way to win","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"munkkeli","author_uid":"1051955","time":"2020-04-20T10:13:11Z","epoch":1587377591,"modified":1587377591,"text":"The graphics are great! I think subtitles would be nice, but I undestand they probably weren't a priority :D. The gameplay is simple but fun, although, like you mentioned earlier, a progressbar would be a good addition. A great entry nonetheless!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-20T10:14:13Z","epoch":1587377653,"modified":1587377653,"text":"@kontroman Thanks for playing! It seems like it's unclear how the X button works. The anti-matter stream (smoke trail) coming off the flame is what generates the win condition, so you need to keep it wide without letting it overload the system.","likes":0,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-20T10:21:21Z","epoch":1587378081,"modified":1587378081,"text":"@munkkeli Thanks for playing~","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"pke1029","author_uid":"1140289","time":"2020-04-20T11:00:03Z","epoch":1587380403,"modified":1587380403,"text":"Love the hand drawn assets! :)","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"ChloeOfArroyo","author_uid":"1184171","time":"2020-04-20T11:39:47Z","epoch":1587382787,"modified":1587382787,"text":"Really fun little game, could do with some metric on how 'well' you did (time to completion?) though!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Qazikol","author_uid":"1101226","time":"2020-04-20T13:38:54Z","epoch":1587389934,"modified":1587389934,"text":"Really love the visuals; very dynamic and reactive! I'd never heard of Nima, but will definitely give it a go after seeing this.\n\nGreat work!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-20T18:28:25Z","epoch":1587407305,"modified":1587407305,"text":"Thanks for playing!\n\n@pke1029 :blush: \n\n@chloeofarroyo I'm glad you found it fun enough to want to be scored :grin: \n\n@qazikol https:\/\/rive.app I recommend it! It's like a free version of Spriter Pro with a more modern interface. If you're a Unity dev though the repo is a bit outdated. Feel free to hit me at me@aaron.work if you want some tips.","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Qazikol","author_uid":"1101226","time":"2020-04-20T19:12:38Z","epoch":1587409958,"modified":1587409958,"text":"@jabdownsmash Thanks for the heads up on the Unity repo! I might well take you up on those tips!","likes":0,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"WoooWooo","author_uid":"1053918","time":"2020-04-20T22:41:33Z","epoch":1587422493,"modified":1587422493,"text":"Loved the visual style! Cool that you came in to the jam with a tool in mind and made it work","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"RMHeuer","author_uid":"1198665","time":"2020-04-20T22:46:31Z","epoch":1587422791,"modified":1587422791,"text":"I like your graphics and voices :) I didn't quite get what to do at first, but I eventually figured it out. Best game I've played so far!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-21T00:51:51Z","epoch":1587430311,"modified":1587430311,"text":"Thanks for playing!\n\n@rmheuer thanks for such kind words :joy: ","likes":0,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"","author_uid":"1000000","time":"2020-04-21T01:49:10Z","epoch":1587433750,"modified":1587433750,"text":"I like the art style quite a bit. I think the game relies a little too much audio, perhaps captions could work? I did have to play a few times to understand the game.","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"NEKORUMA","author_uid":"1195356","time":"2020-04-21T01:50:53Z","epoch":1587433853,"modified":1587433853,"text":"great concept!!","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"vano","author_uid":"1179328","time":"2020-04-21T02:38:24Z","epoch":1587436704,"modified":1587436704,"text":"Hi! I'm here from the stream (planet_vano). Thanks for the feedback on my game, I figured I would give you some feedback on yours as well!\n\nOverall I really like the concept. I think the back and forth management of the two controls could have benefited from being a little harder to keep up. I also think that a few simple sound effects could have really helped the immersion of the game. But all in all, I really enjoyed the short little concept there! Nice work! ","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"jabdownsmash","author_uid":"1001622","time":"2020-04-21T05:55:22Z","epoch":1587448522,"modified":1587448522,"text":"@vano @nekoruma thanks for playing!","likes":0,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Hadik","author_uid":"1001314","time":"2020-04-21T20:32:56Z","epoch":1587501176,"modified":1587501176,"text":"Okay, what was that ? :) Very original entry :) You art is so different that I maybe like it :) Simple game with simple goal seen in many games. Big thumbs up for audio :)","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"marcmagus","author_uid":"1133764","time":"2020-04-26T19:12:49Z","epoch":1587928369,"modified":1587928369,"text":"Thanks for bringing your game by my stream to play! If you'd like to watch again, the highlight is now at https:\/\/www.twitch.tv\/videos\/603497059","likes":0,"format":"md"}],"format":"md","images":["ld46\/199677-490a7616d78f5c4dcdeeb4b2a1ac1ca4.png"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/jabdownsmash.itch.io\/failsys","text":"Youtube"},{"url":"https:\/\/github.com\/aaronsantiago\/failsys","text":"Youtube"},{"url":"https:\/\/rive.app\/a\/pork\/files\/nima\/failsys-sh-title\/preview","text":"Youtube"},{"url":"https:\/\/rive.app\/a\/pork\/files\/nima\/spaceship-outro\/preview","text":"Youtube"},{"url":"https:\/\/rive.app\/a\/pork\/files\/nima\/fire-machine\/preview","text":"Youtube"},{"url":"https:\/\/jabdownsmash.com\/failSysOriginal\/","text":"Youtube"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"58685","g_author":"1001622","g_event":"LD46","g_eventkey":"77","g_subevent":"COMPO","g_urlkey":"269178","g_title":"failsys.sh","g_status":"PVT1","g_place":"718","g_commentcount":"29","g_site2_node_id":"199677","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":{"n_key":"199677","n_urlkey":"269178","n_parent":"176557","n_path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/46\/failsys-sh","n_slug":"failsys-sh","n_type":"item","n_subtype":"game","n_subsubtype":"compo","n_author":"1622","n_created":"1587340680","n_modified":"1587407131","n_version":"587764","n_status":"COMMIT"},"node":{"id":199677,"parent":176557,"superparent":9,"author":1622,"type":"item","subtype":"game","subsubtype":"compo","published":"2020-04-20T01:31:20Z","created":"2020-04-19T23:58:00Z","modified":"2020-04-20T18:25:31Z","version":587764,"slug":"failsys-sh","name":"failsys.sh","body":"# [click me to go to itch and play](https:\/\/jabdownsmash.itch.io\/failsys)\n[![title.PNG](\/\/\/raw\/656\/z\/2cbf6.png)](https:\/\/jabdownsmash.itch.io\/failsys)\n\nTake the role of an emergency computer system in this short game. Click the image above to start!\n\nYou'll need a keyboard and some way to listen to the audio! Everything else should be explained by the game. \n\nMade with Unity, Nima, op-z, Audacity, and freetts.com.\n\n------------\n\nI came into this jam wanting to use [Nima](https:\/\/rive.app\/), and had to toss many ideas before I could find something that worked to its strengths. I found it really satisfying to turn some drawings into a full experience over the course of the weekend, and I can see myself using this workflow to make more games like this in the future! Feel free to leave ANY feedback below, I can take it~\n\n#### MESSAGE FOR LD PURISTS\nI realized there was a scene missing that makes the entire thing make sense. As part of my post compo-time bugfixes, I added this in. I REALLY REALLY REALLY think you need this extra 6 seconds of content before the game to have it make sense, but if you want to play the game as submitted during the deadline, the link is below.\n\n## Patch Notes:\n - 10:49 PM 2020\/4\/19 Fixed title music not looping. Added pre-intro cutscene.\n - 12:05 AM 2020\/4\/20 Fixed wording of prompts in game for clarity. Added supporting text to help anyone confused.","meta":{"author":[1622],"grade-07-out":"1","allow-anonymous-comments":"1","link-01":"https:\/\/jabdownsmash.itch.io\/failsys","link-01-tag":[42336],"link-01-name":"HTML5 (webgl)","link-02":"https:\/\/github.com\/aaronsantiago\/failsys","link-02-tag":[42332],"link-02-name":"Github","cover":"\/\/\/content\/656\/z\/2cb3f.png","link-03":"https:\/\/rive.app\/a\/pork\/files\/nima\/failsys-sh-title\/preview","link-03-tag":[42332],"link-03-name":"Nima (title)","link-04":"https:\/\/rive.app\/a\/pork\/files\/nima\/spaceship-outro\/preview","link-04-tag":[42332],"link-04-name":"Nima (outro)","link-05":"https:\/\/rive.app\/a\/pork\/files\/nima\/fire-machine\/preview","link-05-tag":[42332],"link-05-name":"Nima (main)","link-06":"https:\/\/jabdownsmash.com\/failSysOriginal\/","link-06-tag":[42336],"link-06-name":"HTML5 (original submission)"},"path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/46\/failsys-sh","parents":[1,5,9,176557],"love":0,"notes":29,"notes-timestamp":"2020-04-26T19:12:49Z","grade":{"grade-01":32,"grade-02":32,"grade-03":33,"grade-04":33,"grade-05":33,"grade-06":32,"grade-08":33},"magic":{"cool":107.66108438479,"feedback":33,"given":31.875,"grade":32.571428571429,"grade-01-average":3.233,"grade-01-result":718,"grade-02-average":2.567,"grade-02-result":983,"grade-03-average":3.468,"grade-03-result":384,"grade-04-average":3.952,"grade-04-result":254,"grade-05-average":3.806,"grade-05-result":258,"grade-06-average":3.183,"grade-06-result":434,"grade-08-average":3.29,"grade-08-result":452,"smart":-1.6584897839221}},"text":"# [click me to go to itch and play](https:\/\/jabdownsmash.itch.io\/failsys)\n[![title.PNG](\/\/\/raw\/656\/z\/2cbf6.png)](https:\/\/jabdownsmash.itch.io\/failsys)\n\nTake the role of an emergency computer system in this short game. Click the image above to start!\n\nYou'll need a keyboard and some way to listen to the audio! Everything else should be explained by the game. \n\nMade with Unity, Nima, op-z, Audacity, and freetts.com.\n\n------------\n\nI came into this jam wanting to use [Nima](https:\/\/rive.app\/), and had to toss many ideas before I could find something that worked to its strengths. I found it really satisfying to turn some drawings into a full experience over the course of the weekend, and I can see myself using this workflow to make more games like this in the future! Feel free to leave ANY feedback below, I can take it~\n\n#### MESSAGE FOR LD PURISTS\nI realized there was a scene missing that makes the entire thing make sense. As part of my post compo-time bugfixes, I added this in. I REALLY REALLY REALLY think you need this extra 6 seconds of content before the game to have it make sense, but if you want to play the game as submitted during the deadline, the link is below.\n\n## Patch Notes:\n - 10:49 PM 2020\/4\/19 Fixed title music not looping. Added pre-intro cutscene.\n - 12:05 AM 2020\/4\/20 Fixed wording of prompts in game for clarity. Added supporting text to help anyone confused.","title":"failsys.sh"}