{"author_link":"\/users\/dreamlogician","author_name":"dreamlogician","author_uid":"1016920","comments":[{"author_name":"Tommyflower","author_uid":"1014558","time":"2019-10-09T10:24:51Z","epoch":1570616691,"modified":1570616691,"text":"Well written storyT The transition action is funny at the beginning. After a while it becomes a little too slow. I appreciated a lot that you added the save game feauture :)","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"envy_softworks","author_uid":"1165254","time":"2019-10-13T21:47:59Z","epoch":1571003279,"modified":1571003279,"text":"I like how you advance all threads of this nonsensical story at the same time. There is some humour in that. Especially the child of a hurricane and a windmill had me laughing. Unfortunately the transition from screen to screen was too tedious and I did not complete the game.","likes":1,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"Omiya Games","author_uid":"1000317","time":"2019-10-20T04:52:55Z","epoch":1571547175,"modified":1571547480,"text":"...I don't get it...\n\nWriting is fine, and brings about some excellent poetry skills.  I actually do like all the thread of the story barging in very suddenly, with seemingly no reasoning.  I'm not sure I understood the purpose of that setup, though, as I couldn't tell how the ending wrapped all those threads up.\n\nI agree with above comments that the story is a bit slow in pacing, and that does tamper the enjoyment of the game.  At times, while in the middle of swiping between transitions, it would kick in very early between 2 text sections, that the first text becomes obscured and difficult to read.  As such, I ended up skipping parts of the story since I couldn't read a paragraph or two anymore.\n\nETA: also, I get many of those artworks were drawn and depicts images of ye olde times, but a few were...yikes.  And I guess Tom was already ahead of the times for watching Simpsons and playing video games in an era where neither could have existed.","likes":0,"format":"md"},{"author_name":"johnnysix","author_uid":"1010272","time":"2019-10-20T21:47:42Z","epoch":1571608062,"modified":1571608062,"text":"Bonus points for humour!  Would've been more fun without the wipes , maybe if you were developing more, some alternate paths \/ decisions to make would be cool.   Without any choices \/ free will, it's a bit like a slide show.\n![ld45_db-064.jpg](\/\/\/raw\/028\/2\/z\/29c07.jpg)","likes":0,"format":"md"}],"format":"md","images":["ld45\/173864-1c516b9118b98fc7f5f96d7402fabe51.png"],"links":[{"url":"https:\/\/dreamlogician.itch.io\/eleven-days","text":"Youtube"},{"url":"https:\/\/dreamlogician.itch.io\/eleven-days","text":"Youtube"},{"url":"https:\/\/dreamlogician.itch.io\/eleven-days","text":"Youtube"}],"metadata":{"g_key":"59408","g_author":"1016920","g_event":"LD45","g_eventkey":"78","g_subevent":"JAM","g_urlkey":"270604","g_title":"Eleven Days","g_status":"PVT1","g_place":"99999","g_commentcount":"4","g_site2_node_id":"173864","g_hide":"N","g_has_icon":"Y","g_rqueue":"0","g_random":"0"},"nds":{"n_key":"173864","n_urlkey":"270604","n_parent":"159347","n_path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/45\/eleven-days","n_slug":"eleven-days","n_type":"item","n_subtype":"game","n_subsubtype":"jam","n_author":"16920","n_created":"1570490703","n_modified":"1570561387","n_version":"523838","n_status":"COMMIT"},"node":{"id":173864,"parent":159347,"superparent":9,"author":16920,"type":"item","subtype":"game","subsubtype":"jam","published":"2019-10-07T23:42:49Z","created":"2019-10-07T23:25:03Z","modified":"2019-10-08T19:03:07Z","version":523838,"slug":"eleven-days","name":"Eleven Days","body":"![elevenDays.png](\/\/\/raw\/812\/4\/z\/28790.png)\n\n\n\nThe Calendar Act of 1751 declared that eleven days in the following year would not exist.\n\n\n\n**Music:**\n\n\"Breaktime\" by Kevin MacLeod ([incompetech.com](https:\/\/incompetech.com\/)\u200b)\n\nLicensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License\n\nhttp:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/3.0\/\n\u200b\n\n\n**Art:**\n\n\"Humours of an Election\" and \"Industry and Idleness\" by William Hogarth","meta":{"author":[16920],"cover":"\/\/\/content\/812\/4\/z\/2872a.png","grade-05-out":"1","grade-06-out":"1","link-01":"https:\/\/dreamlogician.itch.io\/eleven-days","link-01-tag":[42337],"link-02":"https:\/\/dreamlogician.itch.io\/eleven-days","link-02-tag":[42339],"link-03":"https:\/\/dreamlogician.itch.io\/eleven-days","link-03-tag":[42341]},"path":"\/events\/ludum-dare\/45\/eleven-days","parents":[1,5,9,159347],"love":0,"notes":4,"notes-timestamp":"2019-10-20T21:47:42Z","grade":{"grade-01":7,"grade-02":7,"grade-03":7,"grade-04":7,"grade-07":7,"grade-08":6},"magic":{"cool":102.98573010889,"feedback":5,"given":4.375,"grade":6.8333333333333,"grade-01-average":2.7,"grade-02-average":2.2,"grade-03-average":2.8,"grade-04-average":2.9,"grade-07-average":3.2,"grade-08-average":2.625,"smart":-3.1754163448146}},"text":"![elevenDays.png](\/\/\/raw\/812\/4\/z\/28790.png)\n\n\n\nThe Calendar Act of 1751 declared that eleven days in the following year would not exist.\n\n\n\n**Music:**\n\n\"Breaktime\" by Kevin MacLeod ([incompetech.com](https:\/\/incompetech.com\/)\u200b)\n\nLicensed under Creative Commons: By Attribution 3.0 License\n\nhttp:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by\/3.0\/\n\u200b\n\n\n**Art:**\n\n\"Humours of an Election\" and \"Industry and Idleness\" by William Hogarth","title":"Eleven Days"}